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A few things about myself
Hello everybody, i'm a 17 years old french girl, and i am here to perfect my english speaking and writing...
- I'd like to talk with boys and girls who are about my age and who speak english by birth...
- I went to England two times.
I love music, but my real passion in life is horse-riding !
And i would be pleased if someone could correct my text or send me a message. Thanks :)

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- A few things about myself
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello everybody, i'm a 17 years old french girl, and i am here to perfect my english speaking and writing...
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I'd like to talk with boys and girls who are about my age and who speak english by birth...
  Undi sekarang!
- I'd like to talk with boys and girls who are about my age and who speak eEnglish ~~by birth~~since they were born...
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  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I went to England two times.
  Undi sekarang!
- I whave beent to England tw~~o times~~ice.
  JeCrois Ulasan 1
  
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  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I love music, but my real passion in life is horse-riding !
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- And i would be pleased if someone could correct my text or send me a message. Thanks :)
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5