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I would like to meet new friends
- Hello, I am a new comer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French,I am married and I live in Montreal, my wife and me would like to meet more friends .
- I'd be glad if you contact me by this email :amohamadizade@yahoo.com

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- Hello, I am a new comer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French,I am married and I live in Montreal, my wife and me would like to meet more friends .
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- Hello, I am a new comer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French,. I am married and I live in Montreal~~, m~~. My wife and meI would like to meet more friends .
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- I'd be glad if you contact me by this email :amohamadizade@yahoo.com
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- I'd be glad if you contact me by this email :¶amohamadizade@yahoo.com
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