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Text from AmirhoseinM - English

  • I would like to meet new friends

    • Hello, I am a new comer in Canada and I am looking for some friends to improve my English and French,I am married and I live in Montreal, my wife and me would like to meet more friends .
    • I'd be glad if you contact me by this email :amohamadizade@yahoo.com

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English