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Text from Orpheos - English

    • Pondering about life

    • Then I was younger, I felt really aside of the world, adults would often tell me that as I will grow up things would seems to me more clear.
    • I am now 21, I even though it is still quite young, my place in this world is yet to be specified, I am still inhabited by this feeling that I belong nowhere.
  • Recently, I have gone through a lot of thinking about what I want my lifetime to be used for.
    • I can almost say that I wandered in my wonderings, and get lost all the time.
    • Somehow I still do because there is no final answer for such question, or let's say that I don't there is.
    • Although, I managed through all of this to find a simple principle: "To achieve any fulfillment, One ought no longer to be the same that one has been".
    • Even though, I and everyone change through our experiences and therefore are never completely the same person throughout the different stages of our lives.
    • Is not really the same thing that I mean by this statement.
    • Because if we are changing whilst we experience life, we do not really choose the person that we become, at some point we just adapting to the present events.
    • Hence, if we don't act actively towards who we want to be, we don't really improving...
  • We must change, even by the slightest, every time that we have a chance to do so.
  • I think, because I don't get to know the things that are fulfilling for me yet...
    • Decide that I want to do the day after, is more than an acceptable philosophy for the moment. God!
    • It is so hard to express you profound thoughts in a foreign language :P.

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