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Pesan dari Lesheey - English

  • To censor or not?

    • There are different opinions regard to the question whether TV, radio and other sources of information and content produced by them should be supervised strongly.
    • One part of the society, mostly conservative, sure that government obliged to check any information before publishing, other controversially insists on negative influence of this phenomenon, arguing that any intervention unacceptable, does not matter how delicate it is to exercise.
  • Both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my own perspective is given.
    • It is known that information is a powerful tool for influencing society, therefore, there is a possibility that some individuals will resort to various tricks to achieve the desired result using false news.
  • Moreover, it is obvious that one of the main tasks of any state is the protection of citizens, including dangerous information that can become a threat to the stability of society.
  • If the state would not filter the information, some terrorist organizations, using the media, can try to influence the younger generation, and there are many such examples in history.
    • For example, according to a court decisions, in my country users are denied access to various Internet portals that place illegal information.
    • Looking from the other point of view, it is impossible to disagree that freedom of expression is one those pillars on which any civilized society relies and progresses.
  • In other words, without freedom of speech, it is impossible to postulate a completely free state, no matter what other freedoms and benefits it can substitute for.
  • In addition, it is also likely that the opposite situation will happen when political leaders, using censorship, will in such a way eliminate political competitors under the cover of a struggle, for instance, with terrorism.
  • In conclusion, I am convinced that the government should closely monitor the situation, intervening only in cases where it threatens citizens, strictly observing democratic values.

TOLONG, BANTUANNYA UNTUK MEMBENARKAN SETIAP KALIMAT! - English

  • Judul
  • Kalimat 1
    • There are different opinions regard to the question whether TV, radio and other sources of information and content produced by them should be supervised strongly.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • There are different opinions regard toing the question whether TV, radio and other sources of information and content produced by them should be supervised strongly.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komentar
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
  • Kalimat 2
    • One part of the society, mostly conservative, sure that government obliged to check any information before publishing, other controversially insists on negative influence of this phenomenon, arguing that any intervention unacceptable, does not matter how delicate it is to exercise.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • One part of the society, mostly conservative,is sure that government is obliged to check any information before publishing, other controversially insists on negative influence of this phenomenon, arguing that any intervention is unacceptable,and it does not matter how delicate it is to exercise.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komentar
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
  • Kalimat 3
  • Kalimat 4
    • It is known that information is a powerful tool for influencing society, therefore, there is a possibility that some individuals will resort to various tricks to achieve the desired result using false news.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • It is known that information is a powerful tool for influencing society, and therefore, there is a possibility that some individuals will resort to various tricks to achieve the desired result using false news.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komentar
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
  • Kalimat 5
    • Moreover, it is obvious that one of the main tasks of any state is the protection of citizens, including dangerous information that can become a threat to the stability of society.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
  • Kalimat 6
    • If the state would not filter the information, some terrorist organizations, using the media, can try to influence the younger generation, and there are many such examples in history.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
  • Kalimat 7
    • For example, according to a court decisions, in my country users are denied access to various Internet portals that place illegal information.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • For example, according to a court's decisions, in my country users are denied access to various Internet portals that place illegal information.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komentar
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
  • Kalimat 8
    • Looking from the other point of view, it is impossible to disagree that freedom of expression is one those pillars on which any civilized society relies and progresses.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Looking from the other point of view, it is impossible to disagree that freedom of expression is one of those pillars on which any civilized society relies and progresses.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komentar
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8
  • Kalimat 9
    • In other words, without freedom of speech, it is impossible to postulate a completely free state, no matter what other freedoms and benefits it can substitute for.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 9TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 9
  • Kalimat 10
    • In addition, it is also likely that the opposite situation will happen when political leaders, using censorship, will in such a way eliminate political competitors under the cover of a struggle, for instance, with terrorism.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 10TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 10
  • Kalimat 11
    • In conclusion, I am convinced that the government should closely monitor the situation, intervening only in cases where it threatens citizens, strictly observing democratic values.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 11TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 11