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Text from aye_iso - English

    • Hello everyone , this is my first ^^

    • Hii everybody , i'm aymen k I'm from Algeria , I'm 21 years old , i study engineering , i wanna improve my English that's why im here , also I'm studying English at the Universal Learning Centre , i start from the first level , now i'm in the third level , i can speak and write better than before but I'm still bad .
    • i hope you correct me this part and evaluate me ^^

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English