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Văn bản từ jagoda_pil - English

  • The Letter

    • Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for a scholarship which is offered by the Korean government for foreign students.
    • I have found out about this scholarship from the website of Seoul National University .
    • I am a nineteen–year-old graduate.
  • This year I took my matura exams.
  • I have been learning English for the last eight years and I am at an intermediate level.
    • I would like to begin studies in Korea because I have been interested in Korea for the last six years.
    • In addition, I would like to get to know Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors but all experience I have gained was only via Internet and for me it's not enough.
    • I have been reading a lot about South Korean history, culture and traditions.
    • Moreover, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fascinate me and I would like to bottom the knowledge about these techniques.
    • The reason why I am learning about Korea is that it is my passion.
    • In my opinion South Korea is really interesting country.
    • I believe, that I am the best candidate for this scholarship because I am a hard-working, reliable and an open-minded person.
  • I would like to know more about South Korea.
    • Moreover, staying in Korea will give me the chance to learn the Korean language, which really fascinates me.
  • Studying in Korea is my dream.
    • I would like to study and If it'll be possibility to work in there, I would do that.
    • I hope that my application will be considered positively. .
    • I look forward to hearing from you.
    • Yours faithfully,

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for a scholarship which is offered by the Korean government for foreign students.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Dear Sir,¶

      I am writing to apply for a scholarship which is offered by the Korean
       government for foreign students.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I would like to begin studies in Korea because I have been interested in Korea for the last six years.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I would like to begin studies in Korea because I have been interested in
       Korea for the last six years. and would like to further this interest by immersing into the language, culture, and lifestyle through an education program.
      PK_in_ParisPK_in_Paris profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • In addition, I would like to get to know Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors but all experience I have gained was only via Internet and for me it's not enough.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition, I would like to get to know Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors but all experience I have gained was only via Internet and for me it's not enough.
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    • In addition, I would like to get to know Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors, but all experience I have gained was only via Internet ;and for me, it's not enough.
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    • In addition, I would like to get to know the Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors but all experience I have gained was only via Internet and for me it's not enough way of life, including behaviour, mentality, and cultural practices. Thus far, my interaction has been limited to research on the internet and other sources. Nonetheless I am determined to fulfil my curiosity through an immersive educational program.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition, I would like to get to know Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors, but all experience I have gained was only via Internet and for me it's not enough.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition, I would like to get to know Koreanish people's mentality and behaviors but allthe only experience I have gained was only viais through the Internet and for me it's not enough.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Moreover, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fascinate me and I would like to bottom the knowledge about these techniques.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Moreover, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fascinate me and I would like to bottom the knowledge about these techniques.
      Asma07Asma07 profile picture Comments
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    • Moreover, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fascinated me and, so I would like to bottom the knowledge about these techniques.
      Osamaa7Osamaa7 profile picture Comments 1
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    • MoreoveIn particular, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fasccampaigns deeply inaterest me and I would like to bottom the knowledgaspire to learn more about these techniques. employed in these industries.
      PK_in_ParisPK_in_Paris profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Moreover, Koreanish cinematography and marketing fascinate me and I would like to bottom the knowledge about these techniques.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I believe, that I am the best candidate for this scholarship because I am a hard-working, reliable and an open-minded person.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I believe, that I am the best candidate for this scholarship because I am¶
      a hard      -working, reliable, and an open-minded person.
      DinaokDinaok profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Moreover, staying in Korea will give me the chance to learn the Korean language, which really fascinates me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Moreover,Particularly staying in Korea will give me thea chance to learn the Korean language, which really fascinatamazes me.
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    • I would like to study and If it'll be possibility to work in there, I would do that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I would like to study and If it'll be possibility to w, if the possible, undertake an employment ork in there, I would do that.ternship opportunity in Korea to further my skills.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I would likeant to study and Iif it'll bthe possibility to work in there, I would do that.get a job opportunity or Internship, can hone skills
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