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Tekst nga Juliya1235 - English

    • The growth of citiesis harmful for the environment

    • The problem of the effect of urbanization on nature has always aroused heated debates.
    • Some people think that it is one of the reasons of pollution of the environment, while others claim that the growth of cities does not led to any ecological problems.
    • In my opinion, the urbanization does harm the environment.
    • Firstly, the building of cities implies the destruction of existing ecosystems, deforestation and killing animals.
    • It cannot be done without doing harm the nature.
  • Secondly, there are thousands of factories in the cities.
  • So, their waste material is one of the reasons of pollution of the environment because it pollutes the air, rivers and lakes.
  • However, some people believe that the growth of cities can be useful for the environment.
  • In their view, thanks to the achievements of scientific and technical progress people can build the cities with the energy saving technologies, which can be useful for solving many global problems.
  • Personally, I do not agree with the above opinion.
    • I am convinced that the harm of the urbanization for the nature cannot be decreased by no means.
    • In conclusion, I believe that people should pay more attention to taking care of the nature because the Earth is our home, and we should preserve it for future generations.

JU LUTEM NDIHMONI PËR TË KORIGJUAR ÇDO FJALI! - English