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    • The growth of citiesis harmful for the environment

    • The problem of the effect of urbanization on nature has always aroused heated debates.
    • Some people think that it is one of the reasons of pollution of the environment, while others claim that the growth of cities does not led to any ecological problems.
    • In my opinion, the urbanization does harm the environment.
    • Firstly, the building of cities implies the destruction of existing ecosystems, deforestation and killing animals.
    • It cannot be done without doing harm the nature.
  • Secondly, there are thousands of factories in the cities.
  • So, their waste material is one of the reasons of pollution of the environment because it pollutes the air, rivers and lakes.
  • However, some people believe that the growth of cities can be useful for the environment.
  • In their view, thanks to the achievements of scientific and technical progress people can build the cities with the energy saving technologies, which can be useful for solving many global problems.
  • Personally, I do not agree with the above opinion.
    • I am convinced that the harm of the urbanization for the nature cannot be decreased by no means.
    • In conclusion, I believe that people should pay more attention to taking care of the nature because the Earth is our home, and we should preserve it for future generations.

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