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- new member from VietNam
- the first time i join this club and also type this entry firstly :) My desire is to make many friends, specially english.
- I also hope i can improve my E through chatting, talking online, or meeting maybe with native speakers.
- anyone are ready with me???

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- new member from VietNam
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- new member from VietNnam
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- the first time i join this club and also type this entry firstly :) My desire is to make many friends, specially english.
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- I also hope i can improve my E through chatting, talking online, or meeting maybe with native speakers.
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- anyone are ready with me???
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- is anyone ~~are~~ ready with me???
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