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Text from hiennguyen - English

    • new member from VietNam

    • the first time i join this club and also type this entry firstly :) My desire is to make many friends, specially english.
    • I also hope i can improve my E through chatting, talking online, or meeting maybe with native speakers.
    • anyone are ready with me???

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English