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    • Perfect Day

    • A perfect day is for me, when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
    • The first thing i do is that i went to the kitchen and do breakfast.
    • My breakfast must something like cake, ice cream or chocolate.
    • After that i go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.
    • The most important thing to make my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends.
    • After the shopping trip, me and my friends eat pizza at the end of the day.

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  • câu 1
    • A perfect day is for me, when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A(For me) a perfect day is for me, when iI can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay for a while in my bed.
      JacobRavnJacobRavn profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A perfect day is for me, when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.¶A perfect day for me is when I can wake at 10 o' clock and lye in my bed for a while longer.
      DenySaabjiDenySaabji profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • AThe perfect day is for me, is that when iI can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
      FattoshFattosh profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A perfect day is for me, is when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
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  • câu 4
    • After that i go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After that iI go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.
      JacobRavnJacobRavn profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After that i go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.¶There is not really much wrong with this sentence in conjunction with the above sentences. However the i has to be a capital letter...I and by choice you could have a comma after 'After that.'
      DenySaabjiDenySaabji profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After that, i go to the bathroom and make myselfget ready for the day.
      AtulJAtulJ profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • The most important thing to make my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The most important thing to make my daelement in making my perfect day is to go shopping with my friends.
      JacobRavnJacobRavn profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The most important thing to make my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends. You could have: Above all, the most important thing to make my day perfect is going...is to go shopping with my friends.( there are many variations on this sentence too.
      DenySaabjiDenySaabji profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The most important thing tohat makes my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • After the shopping trip, me and my friends eat pizza at the end of the day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After the shopping trip, me and my friends eat pizza at the end of the day. ¶The correct grammar in this sentence would be...¶After the shopping trip, my friends and I eat pizza at the end of the day, or perfect day. there are also many variations on this sentence.
      DenySaabjiDenySaabji profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After the shopping trip, m at the aend of the day,my friends and me eat pizza at the end of the day. ¶
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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