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    • Perfect Day

    • A perfect day is for me, when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
    • The first thing i do is that i went to the kitchen and do breakfast.
    • My breakfast must something like cake, ice cream or chocolate.
    • After that i go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.
    • The most important thing to make my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends.
    • After the shopping trip, me and my friends eat pizza at the end of the day.

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  • 문장 1
    • A perfect day is for me, when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
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    • A(For me) a perfect day is for me, when iI can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay for a while in my bed.
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    • A perfect day is for me, when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.¶A perfect day for me is when I can wake at 10 o' clock and lye in my bed for a while longer.
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    • AThe perfect day is for me, is that when iI can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
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    • A perfect day is for me, is when i can wake up at 10 o'clock and stay a while in my bed.
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  • 문장 2
    • The first thing i do is that i went to the kitchen and do breakfast.
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    • The first thing iI do is that i wentI go to the kitchen and domake some breakfast.
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    • The first thing i do is that i went to the kitchen and do breakfast.¶The first thing I do on getting out of bed is go to the kitchen and have breakfast.( there are many variations on this sentence)
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    • The first thing iI do is that i wentgoing to the kitchen and doto prepare the breakfast.
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    • The first thing i do is that i wento go to the kitchen and dohave breakfast.
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  • 문장 3
    • My breakfast must something like cake, ice cream or chocolate.
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    • My breakfast musthas to be something like cake, ice cream or chocolate.
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    • My breakfast must something like cake, ice cream or chocolate.¶My breakfast must be something like cake, ice cream or chocolate.(there are also many variations on this sentence too)
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  • 문장 4
    • After that i go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.
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    • After that iI go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.
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    • After that i go to the bathroom and make myself ready for the day.¶There is not really much wrong with this sentence in conjunction with the above sentences. However the i has to be a capital letter...I and by choice you could have a comma after 'After that.'
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    • After that, i go to the bathroom and make myselfget ready for the day.
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  • 문장 5
    • The most important thing to make my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends.
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    • The most important thing to make my daelement in making my perfect day is to go shopping with my friends.
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    • The most important thing to make my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends. You could have: Above all, the most important thing to make my day perfect is going...is to go shopping with my friends.( there are many variations on this sentence too.
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    • The most important thing tohat makes my day perfect is to go shopping with my friends.
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    • After the shopping trip, me and my friends eat pizza at the end of the day.
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    • After the shopping trip, me and my friends eat pizza at the end of the day. ¶The correct grammar in this sentence would be...¶After the shopping trip, my friends and I eat pizza at the end of the day, or perfect day. there are also many variations on this sentence.
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    • After the shopping trip, m at the aend of the day,my friends and me eat pizza at the end of the day. ¶
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