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  • The Big Thing

    • In the last 100 years, scientists have probably made more discoveries and inventions than the previous millennium.
    • The science is following a pace like never before.
    • It is difficult to be up-to-date about what is happening on the scientific community, read newspapers lead to an amusement of how much has been done at the same time.
  • Within 100 years, many relevant things happened; Einstein developed the Theory of Relativity and changed the way we see the universe.
    • The medicine has made significant advances on researches to cure diseases, it seems only a matter of time until we read the news about the cure of the AIDS or the discovery of an efficient treatment for cancer, further, vaccines were created to prevent the dead of millions of people by diseases which have killed millions before.
    • The aviation has also made incredible things, transforming the world into a small place, there are no more impossible lengths to cross, at least, not in the planet.
    • However, any of those inventions or discoveries caused a great impact on the world as the internet is doing.
    • The network which connect electronic devices through the planet is changing many aspects of life, from the countries' economy to the shopping list of a housewife.
    • The internet is responsible for the change of big players on business.
    • As an illustration, the Napster and other platforms to share music modified the phonographic industry on its bases.
    • Nobody else buys CD's and many people download music for free, without paying anything to anyone, and the same have been observed with books and movies.
    • The sales of newspapers decrease to alarming levels in the last few years, and many famous journals are close to the bankrupt.
    • In contrast, many new companies emerged and are playing an important role in the market, like Apple and its iPhones or Google and its powerful search engine and other services.
    • Secondly, the rise of online social networks have changed the way people relate with others.
    • Most of the people have a profile on sites like Facebook, LinkedIn or Instangram.
    • Instead of call each other or meet on a bar, sometimes people prefer make a hangout reunion on Google Plus.
    • A great number of relationships started on the internet and continued through biggest commitments like marriage.
    • Click on the 'like' button on the Facebook has a lot of potential meanings, we do not only talk or write to our friends anymore, we put or lives on a wall.
    • Furthermore, the internet is responsible for spreading information on a scale never saw before.
    • If something happening in the US, it is news within minutes on Japan.
    • The Wikipedia is more complete and reliable than any other paper encyclopedia.
    • Good quality knowledge is no more an exclusivity of colleges or to a small elite, it is now tangible for anyone with a computer and an internet connection.
    • The literacy level of people is rising, and it will rise more in the next years.
    • The internet is making of us smarter people.
    • We are living a new renaissance age.
  • The old norms and social structures which ruled the world are gritting and shortly it will fall apart.
    • It is a wonderful time to live, it is a chance to make history and make the world a better place for those who not born yet.
  • Then, they are going to remember us for more than 100 years.

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    • In the last 100 years, scientists have probably made more discoveries and inventions than the previous millennium.
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    • In the last 100 years, scientists have probably made more discoveries and inventions than in the previous millennium.
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    • It is difficult to be up-to-date about what is happening on the scientific community, read newspapers lead to an amusement of how much has been done at the same time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is difficult to be up-to-date about what is happening oin the scientific community, reading newspapers can lead to an amusementunderstanding of how much has been done at the samein a given time.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • Within 100 years, many relevant things happened; Einstein developed the Theory of Relativity and changed the way we see the universe.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • The medicine has made significant advances on researches to cure diseases, it seems only a matter of time until we read the news about the cure of the AIDS or the discovery of an efficient treatment for cancer, further, vaccines were created to prevent the dead of millions of people by diseases which have killed millions before.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The medicine has madere have been significant advances onin medicine: researches into cureing diseases, it seems only a matter of time until we read the news about the cure of the AIDS or the discovery of an efficient treatment for cancer, f. Furthermore, vaccines were created to prevent the deadth of millions of people bydue to diseases which have killed millions before.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • The aviation has also made incredible things, transforming the world into a small place, there are no more impossible lengths to cross, at least, not in the planet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The aAviation has also made incredible things, transforming the world into a small place, there are no more impossible lengths to cross, at least, not within the planet.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • However, any of those inventions or discoveries caused a great impact on the world as the internet is doing.
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    • However, anynone of thoese inventions or discoveries have caused as great an impact on the world as the internet is doing.
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    • The network which connect electronic devices through the planet is changing many aspects of life, from the countries' economy to the shopping list of a housewife.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The network which connects electronic devices throughout the planet is changing many aspects of life, from the countries' economy to the shopping list of a housewife.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • As an illustration, the Napster and other platforms to share music modified the phonographic industry on its bases.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • As an illustration, the Napster and other platforms to share music have modified the phonographmusic industry on its bases.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
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    • Nobody else buys CD's and many people download music for free, without paying anything to anyone, and the same have been observed with books and movies.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Nobody else buys CD's any more and many people download music for free, without paying anything to anyone, and the same have been observed with books and movies.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • The sales of newspapers decrease to alarming levels in the last few years, and many famous journals are close to the bankrupt.
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    • The sales of newspapers has decrease tod at an alarming levelsrate in the last few years, and many famous journalnewspapers are close to thebeing bankrupt.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • In contrast, many new companies emerged and are playing an important role in the market, like Apple and its iPhones or Google and its powerful search engine and other services.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In contrast, many new companies have emerged and are playing an important role in the market, like Apple and its iPhones or Google and its powerful search engine and other services.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • Instead of call each other or meet on a bar, sometimes people prefer make a hangout reunion on Google Plus.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Instead of calling each other or meet oing in a bar, sometimes people prefer to make a hangout reunion on Google Plus.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
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    • A great number of relationships started on the internet and continued through biggest commitments like marriage.
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    • A great number of relationships have started on the internet and continued through biggest commitments like marriage.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
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    • Click on the 'like' button on the Facebook has a lot of potential meanings, we do not only talk or write to our friends anymore, we put or lives on a wall.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Clicking on the 'like' button on the Facebook has a lot of potential meanings, we do not only talk or write to our friends anymore, we put or lives on a wall.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
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    • Good quality knowledge is no more an exclusivity of colleges or to a small elite, it is now tangible for anyone with a computer and an internet connection.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Good quality knowledge is no more an exclusivity ofe to colleges or to a small elite population, it is now tangiavailable for anyone with a computer and an internet connection.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22
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    • It is a wonderful time to live, it is a chance to make history and make the world a better place for those who not born yet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is a wonderful time to live, it is a chance to make history and make the world a better place for those who are not born yet.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27
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