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  • New Moon and Full Moon day in Vietnam

    • According to customs of Vietnamese, the New Moon and Full Moon are 2 of the worshiping ancestor days.
    • In lunar calendar, New Moon is the first day of month (1st), Full Moon is middle day of month (15th).
    • In 2 that days, Vietnamese usaully prepare flower and fruit on altar, then they burn ancense to worship their ancestor.
    • Old woman always remember those days, becuase they are respondsible for prepare offering.Some year ago, I usually go to market to buy food in morning of every day.
    • When I saw every old woman bought flower and fruit, I'm sure that day is New Moon or Full Moon day.
    • Now, I only go to supermarket on weekend and buy food, so I don't see the scene every old woman buy offering on that days.

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  • câu 2
    • In lunar calendar, New Moon is the first day of month (1st), Full Moon is middle day of month (15th).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In the lunar calendar, New Moon day is the first day of month (1st), while Full Moon day is middle day of month (15th).
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • In 2 that days, Vietnamese usaully prepare flower and fruit on altar, then they burn ancense to worship their ancestor.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In 2 thatthose two days, Vietnamese usaually prepare flower and fruit on altar, then they burn aincense sticks to worship their ancestor.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Old woman always remember those days, becuase they are respondsible for prepare offering.Some year ago, I usually go to market to buy food in morning of every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Old womaen always remember those days, becuause they are respondsible for prepin charge of offering. Some years ago, I usually gowent to market to buyfor food ineach morning of every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • When I saw every old woman bought flower and fruit, I'm sure that day is New Moon or Full Moon day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I saw ea very old woman I bought her some flowers and fruits, I'm sure that the day is New Moon or Full Moon day.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Now, I only go to supermarket on weekend and buy food, so I don't see the scene every old woman buy offering on that days.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Now, I only go to the supermarket on weekends and buy food, so I don't see the scene every old womaen buying offerings on that days.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6