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    • THE ELDERLY PARTY WAS A REALLY SUCCESS I would like to respond to the article published in the last week edition.
    • It criticised very hardly different aspects of the elderly party organized by our college.
  • But none of them are true.
  • Therefore, I would like to explain how the party was carried out.
    • The article said the comedian Jimmy Jones made the public bored to stiff but the situation was rather different.
  • Old people enjoyed a lot with him and most of them asked the college in order to hire this comedian.
    • Another point I would like to clarify is that elderly people were not able to dance jazz because this kind of music is not suitable for them.
    • However, old people begged if we as the organizers of the party, could bring a group of jazz due to the fact that they loved it.
    • To top it all, I would like to talk about the food we served during lunch.
    • It could be possible some people complained about it but most of them told to the organizers the food was incredibly tasty.
    • To conclusion, I am pleased you have given to me the opportunity to clarify all of these aspects about the elderly party and I request you next time check and ask the organizers any questions before you publish an article. Sincerely

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    • THE ELDERLY PARTY WAS A REALLY SUCCESS I would like to respond to the article published in the last week edition.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • THE ELDERLY PARTY WAS A REALLY SUCCESS¶¶I would like to respond to the article published in the last week's edition.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • The article said the comedian Jimmy Jones made the public bored to stiff but the situation was rather different.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The article said the comedian Jimmy Jones made the public bored to stiffdeath but the situation was rather different.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • Another point I would like to clarify is that elderly people were not able to dance jazz because this kind of music is not suitable for them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Another point that I would like to clarify is that elderly people were not able to dance in jazz music because this kind of music is not suitable for them.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • However, old people begged if we as the organizers of the party, could bring a group of jazz due to the fact that they loved it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • However, old people begged us if we as the organizers of the party, could bring a group of jazz musicians due to the fact that they loved it.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It could be possible some people complained about it but most of them told to the organizers the food was incredibly tasty.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It could be possible that some people complained about it but most of them told to the organizers that the food was incredibly tasty.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
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    • To conclusion, I am pleased you have given to me the opportunity to clarify all of these aspects about the elderly party and I request you next time check and ask the organizers any questions before you publish an article. Sincerely
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ToIn conclusion, I am pleased that you have given to me the opportunity to clarify all of these aspects about the elderly party and I request you to check next time check and ask the organizers any questions before you publish an article. Sincerely your's
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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