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  • LETTER OF COMPLAINT

    • Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to lodge a number of complaints during a flight to Florida and back with your company Ocean Air.
    • Although everything happened as arranged in your leaflet, there were a lot of problems in the flight which I would like you to know them.
  • Firstly, as I saw in your advertisement published in a magazine of the national airport, you offer 4 flights a day.
    • The day I took the flight to Florida, all of the flights had a late boarding.
    • I had to wait at least more than one hour in the airport.
    • This wait made me lose the bus I had to take in order to arrive to the hotel in Florida.
    • Therefore, I took a taxi which supposed to pay more money.
  • The seat I booked was very comfortable and wide as you offered.
    • However, the staff during the flight was rather rude, the contrary that you tendered in the leaflet offering friendly staff.
    • On the other hand, I specially booked the flight with your company because I am vegetarian and I always have a lot of problems in order to have lunch during the flights.
    • But I was disappointed when you did not have a special diet for vegetarians as you offered in your advertisement.
    • To top it all, I would like to tell you that there was not the latest entertainment in the flight.
    • I was bored to stiff because you put on TV plane a film that I have already seen very recently on TV.
    • Thus, due to all the troubles I encountered during both flights (the food, the boring film, the rude staff and my loss of money with the bus and the payment to the taxi-driver), I am entitled to some kind of compensation and as far as I am concerned, Ocean Air company should take steps to prevent this situation from arising in the future. Sincerely

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    • Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to lodge a number of complaints during a flight to Florida and back with your company Ocean Air.
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    • Dear Sir/Madam¶¶I am writing to lodge a number of complaints during a flight to Florida and back with your companyAirline Ocean Air.
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    • Although everything happened as arranged in your leaflet, there were a lot of problems in the flight which I would like you to know them.
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    • Although everything happened as arranged in your leaflet, there were a lot of problems in the flight which I would like you to know them.
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    • However, the staff during the flight was rather rude, the contrary that you tendered in the leaflet offering friendly staff.
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    • However, the staff during the flight the staff was rather rude, on the contrary that you tendered in the leaflet offering friendly staff.
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    • On the other hand, I specially booked the flight with your company because I am vegetarian and I always have a lot of problems in order to have lunch during the flights.
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    • On the other hand, I specially booked the flight with your company because I am a vegetarian and I always have a lot of problems in order to have lunch during the flights.
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    • Thus, due to all the troubles I encountered during both flights (the food, the boring film, the rude staff and my loss of money with the bus and the payment to the taxi-driver), I am entitled to some kind of compensation and as far as I am concerned, Ocean Air company should take steps to prevent this situation from arising in the future. Sincerely
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    • Thus, due to all the troubles I encountered during both flights (the food, the boring film, the rude staff and my loss of money with the bus and the payment to the taxi-driver), I am entitled to some kind of compensation and as far as I am concerned, Ocean Air company should take steps to prevent this situation from arising in the future. SincerelyThank you.
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