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  • Essay introduction

    • During that year I followed the professional degree course of Corporate Networking in SCHOOLNAME.
    • To support this course, I have done my co-op at COMPANYNAME, in the entity Technical Support and Services.
  • I have been hired for the position of material inspector.
    • The task of this co-op job are the hardware maintenance and the installation of COMPANYNAME products and no-COMPANYNAME.
    • With my co-op supervisor Mr. SUPERVISORNAME, we acted for the COMPANYNAME customers mainly in the Northern part Ile de France.
    • In addition to this job, I have achieved the implementation of a backup solution made for the co-worker test and course platform located in Noisy le Grand.
  • This project was the subject of my last technical essay.
    • The purpose of this memory will be to present to you my year of alternate programme in professional degree course of Corporate Networking at the COMPANYNAMR company.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • The task of this co-op job are the hardware maintenance and the installation of COMPANYNAME products and no-COMPANYNAME.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The tasks of this co-op job are the hardware maintenance and the installation of COMPANY NAME products and no-COMPANY NAME.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • With my co-op supervisor Mr. SUPERVISORNAME, we acted for the COMPANYNAME customers mainly in the Northern part Ile de France.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • With my co-op supervisor Mr. SUPERVISOR NAME, we acted for the COMPANY NAME customers mainly in the Northern part of France in Ile de France.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • In addition to this job, I have achieved the implementation of a backup solution made for the co-worker test and course platform located in Noisy le Grand.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition to this job, I have achieved the implementation of a backup solution made for the co-workers test and the course platform located in Noisy le Grand.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • The purpose of this memory will be to present to you my year of alternate programme in professional degree course of Corporate Networking at the COMPANYNAMR company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The purpose of this memory will be to present to you my year of alternate programme in professional degree course of Corporate Networking at the COMPANY NAMRE company.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8