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    • During that year I followed the professional degree course of Corporate Networking in SCHOOLNAME.
    • To support this course, I have done my co-op at COMPANYNAME, in the entity Technical Support and Services.
  • I have been hired for the position of material inspector.
    • The task of this co-op job are the hardware maintenance and the installation of COMPANYNAME products and no-COMPANYNAME.
    • With my co-op supervisor Mr. SUPERVISORNAME, we acted for the COMPANYNAME customers mainly in the Northern part Ile de France.
    • In addition to this job, I have achieved the implementation of a backup solution made for the co-worker test and course platform located in Noisy le Grand.
  • This project was the subject of my last technical essay.
    • The purpose of this memory will be to present to you my year of alternate programme in professional degree course of Corporate Networking at the COMPANYNAMR company.

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    • To support this course, I have done my co-op at COMPANYNAME, in the entity Technical Support and Services.
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    • To support this course, I have done my co-op at COMPANY NAME, in the entity Technical Support and Services.
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    • The task of this co-op job are the hardware maintenance and the installation of COMPANYNAME products and no-COMPANYNAME.
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    • The tasks of this co-op job are the hardware maintenance and the installation of COMPANY NAME products and no-COMPANY NAME.
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    • With my co-op supervisor Mr. SUPERVISORNAME, we acted for the COMPANYNAME customers mainly in the Northern part Ile de France.
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    • With my co-op supervisor Mr. SUPERVISOR NAME, we acted for the COMPANY NAME customers mainly in the Northern part of France in Ile de France.
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    • In addition to this job, I have achieved the implementation of a backup solution made for the co-worker test and course platform located in Noisy le Grand.
      투표하세요!
    • In addition to this job, I have achieved the implementation of a backup solution made for the co-workers test and the course platform located in Noisy le Grand.
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      투표하세요!
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    • The purpose of this memory will be to present to you my year of alternate programme in professional degree course of Corporate Networking at the COMPANYNAMR company.
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    • The purpose of this memory will be to present to you my year of alternate programme in professional degree course of Corporate Networking at the COMPANY NAMRE company.
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