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    • A writing assignment in IELTS

  • As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
  • To what extent do you agree or disagree.
    • The rapid development of social economy have paved way for creating more and more opulent corporations.
    • Some people argue that businesses should take related responsibilities apart from making money.
  • I fully agree with this opinion.
    • First, a harmonious society is constituted with various components, each of which should shoulder some responsibilities and businesses are not an exception.
    • In addition, a sanguine environment resulted from taking responsibilities can in turn help create a positive and upbeat atmosphere contributing to better development of businesses.
    • For instance, the success of Alibaba mainly owes to appropriate economic policy at that time which encouraged small businesses to develop virtual economy leading to the formation of a new top corporation which repaid what it got from the society through establishing business schools to cultivate youngsters with innovative ideas and knowledge.
    • Second, it cannot be denied that making profits is the top priority for a company, but related obligations should not be neglected, which not only refrain entrepreneurs from committing commercial crimes like producing harmful goods but also offer an opportunity to present a good image to the public --- the best promotion tactic.
    • Third, the combination of responsibilities and profits boosts an all-round and long-term development of a certain company.
  • To conclude, on top of making money, businesses should also shoulder obligations to achieve an optimal result both for themselves and the whole society as well.

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    • First, a harmonious society is constituted with various components, each of which should shoulder some responsibilities and businesses are not an exception.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • First, a harmonious society is constituted withof various components, each of which should shoulder some responsibilities and businesses are not an exception.
      MithrawnurroMithrawnurro profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • In addition, a sanguine environment resulted from taking responsibilities can in turn help create a positive and upbeat atmosphere contributing to better development of businesses.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In addition, a sanguine environment resulteding from taking responsibilitiesy can in turn help create a positive and upbeat atmosphere contributing to better development of businesses.
      MithrawnurroMithrawnurro profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • For instance, the success of Alibaba mainly owes to appropriate economic policy at that time which encouraged small businesses to develop virtual economy leading to the formation of a new top corporation which repaid what it got from the society through establishing business schools to cultivate youngsters with innovative ideas and knowledge.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For instance, the success of Alibaba is mainly owesd to appropriate economic policyies at that time which encouraged small businesses to develop virtual economyies leading to the formation of a new top corporation which repaid what it got from the society through establishing business schools to cultivate youngsters with innovative ideas and knowledge.
      MithrawnurroMithrawnurro profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Second, it cannot be denied that making profits is the top priority for a company, but related obligations should not be neglected, which not only refrain entrepreneurs from committing commercial crimes like producing harmful goods but also offer an opportunity to present a good image to the public --- the best promotion tactic.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Second, it cannot be denied that makximizing profits is the top priority for a company, but related obligations should not be neglected, which not only refrainstrict entrepreneurs from committing commercial crimes like producing harmful goods but also offer an opportunity to present a good image to the public --- the best promotion tactic.
      MithrawnurroMithrawnurro profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • Third, the combination of responsibilities and profits boosts an all-round and long-term development of a certain company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Third, the combination of responsibilities and profits boosts an all-round and long-term development of a certaigiven company.
      MithrawnurroMithrawnurro profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • To conclude, on top of making money, businesses should also shoulder obligations to achieve an optimal result both for themselves and the whole society as well.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11