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    • a writing practice in IELTS test

    • Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
    • The innovation of social media has changed readers' reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than on newspapers.
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution on people's life due to their harmful composition like lead.
    • Secondly, newspapers are made of wood, to be more precise---trees, which play an important role in refraining people from intaking too many contaminants.
    • While the publication of newspapers causes a great number of trees being cut down, which in turn does harm to people's respiratory system.
    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly trait.

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  • Sentence 3
    • The innovation of social media has changed readers' reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than on newspapers.
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    • The innovation of social media has changed readers' reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than onin/from a newspapers.
    • The innovation of social media has changed readers's reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than on newspapers.
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  • Sentence 4
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
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    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore. I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
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  • Sentence 5
    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution on people's life due to their harmful composition like lead.
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    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution onf people's lifeves due to their harmful composition likewhich includes lead.
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  • Sentence 6
    • Secondly, newspapers are made of wood, to be more precise---trees, which play an important role in refraining people from intaking too many contaminants.
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    • Secondly, newspapers are made of wood, t. To be more precise---trees, which play an important role in refraining people from inpartaking of too many contaminants.
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  • Sentence 7
    • While the publication of newspapers causes a great number of trees being cut down, which in turn does harm to people's respiratory system.
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    • WhileFurthermore, the publication of newspapers causes the leveling of a great number of trees being cut down, which in turn does harm tos people's respiratory systems.
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  • Sentence 8
    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
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    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones, tablets, and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
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  • Sentence 9
    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
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    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue thereby helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
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  • Sentence 10
    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly trait.
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    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly traits.
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