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    • a writing practice in IELTS test

    • Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
    • The innovation of social media has changed readers' reading habits with an increasing number of people reading news online rather than on newspapers.
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution on people's life due to their harmful composition like lead.
    • Secondly, newspapers are made of wood, to be more precise---trees, which play an important role in refraining people from intaking too many contaminants.
    • While the publication of newspapers causes a great number of trees being cut down, which in turn does harm to people's respiratory system.
    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly trait.

Venligst hjælp med at rette hver en sætning! - English

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    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
      Stem nu!
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
    • Whereas some people still hold an opposite view on this trend, therefore. I would argue that printed newspapers will be superseded by online news in the future.
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 4Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 4
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    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution on people's life due to their harmful composition like lead.
      Stem nu!
    • Firstly, compared with totally clean and environmentally friendly online issues, printed newspapers have led to great pollution onf people's lifeves due to their harmful composition likewhich includes lead.
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 5Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 5
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    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
      Stem nu!
    • Thirdly, current affairs on the Internet enables readers to get more instant information via portable devices such as cellphones, tablets, and computers which are easy to carry without creating any pollution.
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 8Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 8
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    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
      Stem nu!
    • Finally, online news also provides common people with a more vivid and comprehensive understanding of a certain issue thereby helping them shape objective views towards specific phenomena through colorful pictures and videos.
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 9Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 9
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    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly trait.
      Stem nu!
    • To conclude, it is clear that news on the Internet possesses more merits in comparison with newspapers owing to its portability and environmentally friendly traits.
    • Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 10Tilføj en ny rettelse! - Sætning 10