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Văn bản từ maryv88 - English

    • My personal statements essay

    • Everyone knows that it needs a good amount of hard work and perseverance to teach.
    • However, I never appreciated these qualities until I started working in a British school.
  • I obtained my high school degree in languages in 2007.
    • My wish to keep on learning languages made me enroll at the University " l'Orientale" in Naples to study both English and Chinese for my bachelor degree that I finished in 2011.
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "modern languages and literature", and I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University just called me in the November of the same year.
    • One of the teacher of the school she was working for had to move to another city, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
    • During my university career, I made "One-to-One" lessons for high school students to rehearse grammar, to prove my teaching skills and to make a living.
    • However, I had never had a class of my own to teach until that moment, so I wished to put myself on the line for the very first time with a real class.
    • I started with a class of 12-13 years old who needed to get the Cambridge Movers certificate.
    • I realized soon that my duty was not just to provide them the vocabulary and grammar contents.
  • Those children were all Italians and came from different social backgrounds.
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine and their classmates' judgment.
    • So during the lesson's practice time, I encouraged them to use their personal experience to make sentences useful to strengthen what they learned during the "presentation time." Moreover, I took advantage of my students' competitive side both to maintain their motivation and to challenge their memory at the end of the lesson.
    • I used to split them into groups to play Word games, such as the classical " Hangman" or slightly modifying speaking activities such as " Guess where or who?" to let them show up not only their English skills but also their general knowledge as well.
    • Later, I started to work as an English teacher for an accounting school, and another challenge that waited for me was to face with dyslexic students.
    • I had never taught to one of them, and my universities didn't provide any course to teach students who had special needs.
    • Nevertheless thanks to my principals' suggestions I started to experiment some techniques based on " Visual skills" development.
    • I used the method of " flash cards." to help them learn the vocabulary without writing anything at all.
    • Also, I let them use the same flash cards to make them arrange their personal sentence, to get a proper feedback of what they had learned.
    • Now I am trying to find out how to make macros with visual basic to create more interactive exercises for dyslexic students, but since I am not good at learning things by heart, my memory is struggling to remember the correct codes to use to make the macros work correctly.
    • In conclusion, I believe to be a suitable candidate to apply for this position because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of trying new teaching techniques if they help my students to gain confidence in their abilities.

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    • My wish to keep on learning languages made me enroll at the University " l'Orientale" in Naples to study both English and Chinese for my bachelor degree that I finished in 2011.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My wish to keep on learning languages made me enroll at the University " l'Orientale" in Naples to study both English and Chinese for my bachelor's degree that I finished in 2011.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "modern languages and literature", and I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University just called me in the November of the same year.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "mModern lLanguages and lLiterature", and I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University justsuddenly called me in the November of the same year.
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "modern languages and literature", and at the same time I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University just called me in the November of the same year.
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "mModern lLanguages and lLiterature", and I was. While looking for a job when aI received a call from a colleague from the University just called me in thethat November of the same year.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • One of the teacher of the school she was working for had to move to another city, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One of the teacher ofs from the school she was working forat had to move to another city, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
    • One of the teachers of the school she was working for had to move to another city, and the pPrincipals wereas looking for someone to take her place.
    • One of the teacher ofs from the school where she was working for, had to move to another citaway, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • During my university career, I made "One-to-One" lessons for high school students to rehearse grammar, to prove my teaching skills and to make a living.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • During my uUniversity careerdays, I made "One-to-One" lessons for high school students to rehearse grammar, to improve my teaching skills and to make a living.
    • During my university career, I made "One-to-One" lessons forwith high school students to rehearspractice grammar, to improve my teaching skills and to make a living.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • However, I had never had a class of my own to teach until that moment, so I wished to put myself on the line for the very first time with a real class.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • However, I had never hadtaught a class of my own to teach until that moment, so I wished to put myselfas put on the line for the very first time with a real class.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine and their classmates' judgment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine and their classmates' judgment and mine.
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine andthe judgement of their classmates' judgment. and my own
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • So during the lesson's practice time, I encouraged them to use their personal experience to make sentences useful to strengthen what they learned during the "presentation time." Moreover, I took advantage of my students' competitive side both to maintain their motivation and to challenge their memory at the end of the lesson.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • So during the lesson's practice time, I encouraged them to use their personal experience to make sentences useful tothat would strengthen what they had learned during the "presentation time." Moreover, I took advantage of my students' competitive side both to maintain their motivation and to challenge their memory at the end of the lesson.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • I used to split them into groups to play Word games, such as the classical " Hangman" or slightly modifying speaking activities such as " Guess where or who?" to let them show up not only their English skills but also their general knowledge as well.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I used to split them into groups to play Wword games, such as the classical " Hangman" or slightly modifying speaking activities such as " Guess where or who?" toThis let them show up not only their English skills, but also their general knowledge as well.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • Later, I started to work as an English teacher for an accounting school, and another challenge that waited for me was to face with dyslexic students.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Later, I started to work as an English teacher for an accounting school, and another challenge that awaited for me was to face witteach dyslexic students.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
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    • I had never taught to one of them, and my universities didn't provide any course to teach students who had special needs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I had never taught to one of thema dyslexic student before, and my universitiesy didn't provide any courses to teach students who had special needs.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
  • câu 17
    • Nevertheless thanks to my principals' suggestions I started to experiment some techniques based on " Visual skills" development.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Nevertheless, thanks to my principals' suggestions I started to experiment some techniques based on " Visual skills" development.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
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    • Also, I let them use the same flash cards to make them arrange their personal sentence, to get a proper feedback of what they had learned.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Also, I let them use the same flash cards to make them arrange their personal sentence, to get a proper feedback of what they had learnedt.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
  • câu 20
    • Now I am trying to find out how to make macros with visual basic to create more interactive exercises for dyslexic students, but since I am not good at learning things by heart, my memory is struggling to remember the correct codes to use to make the macros work correctly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Now I am trying to find out how to make macros with visual basics to create more interactive exercises for dyslexic students, but since I am not good at learning things by heart, my memory is struggling to remember the correct codes to used to make the macros work correctly.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
  • câu 21
    • In conclusion, I believe to be a suitable candidate to apply for this position because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of trying new teaching techniques if they help my students to gain confidence in their abilities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In conclusion, I believe to behat I am a suitable candidate to apply for this position. This is because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of trying new teaching techniques if they help my students to gain confidence in their abilities.
    • In conclusion, I believe to behat i am a suitable candidate to apply for this position because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of. I am always willing trying new teaching techniques ifn they help my best interest of helping of students to gain confidence in their abilities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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