Korektoj

Text from maryv88 - English

    • My personal statements essay

    • Everyone knows that it needs a good amount of hard work and perseverance to teach.
    • However, I never appreciated these qualities until I started working in a British school.
  • I obtained my high school degree in languages in 2007.
    • My wish to keep on learning languages made me enroll at the University " l'Orientale" in Naples to study both English and Chinese for my bachelor degree that I finished in 2011.
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "modern languages and literature", and I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University just called me in the November of the same year.
    • One of the teacher of the school she was working for had to move to another city, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
    • During my university career, I made "One-to-One" lessons for high school students to rehearse grammar, to prove my teaching skills and to make a living.
    • However, I had never had a class of my own to teach until that moment, so I wished to put myself on the line for the very first time with a real class.
    • I started with a class of 12-13 years old who needed to get the Cambridge Movers certificate.
    • I realized soon that my duty was not just to provide them the vocabulary and grammar contents.
  • Those children were all Italians and came from different social backgrounds.
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine and their classmates' judgment.
    • So during the lesson's practice time, I encouraged them to use their personal experience to make sentences useful to strengthen what they learned during the "presentation time." Moreover, I took advantage of my students' competitive side both to maintain their motivation and to challenge their memory at the end of the lesson.
    • I used to split them into groups to play Word games, such as the classical " Hangman" or slightly modifying speaking activities such as " Guess where or who?" to let them show up not only their English skills but also their general knowledge as well.
    • Later, I started to work as an English teacher for an accounting school, and another challenge that waited for me was to face with dyslexic students.
    • I had never taught to one of them, and my universities didn't provide any course to teach students who had special needs.
    • Nevertheless thanks to my principals' suggestions I started to experiment some techniques based on " Visual skills" development.
    • I used the method of " flash cards." to help them learn the vocabulary without writing anything at all.
    • Also, I let them use the same flash cards to make them arrange their personal sentence, to get a proper feedback of what they had learned.
    • Now I am trying to find out how to make macros with visual basic to create more interactive exercises for dyslexic students, but since I am not good at learning things by heart, my memory is struggling to remember the correct codes to use to make the macros work correctly.
    • In conclusion, I believe to be a suitable candidate to apply for this position because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of trying new teaching techniques if they help my students to gain confidence in their abilities.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • My wish to keep on learning languages made me enroll at the University " l'Orientale" in Naples to study both English and Chinese for my bachelor degree that I finished in 2011.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • My wish to keep on learning languages made me enroll at the University " l'Orientale" in Naples to study both English and Chinese for my bachelor's degree that I finished in 2011.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "modern languages and literature", and I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University just called me in the November of the same year.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "mModern lLanguages and lLiterature", and I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University justsuddenly called me in the November of the same year.
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "modern languages and literature", and at the same time I was looking for a job when a colleague from the University just called me in the November of the same year.
    • In July 2015 I got my MA degree in "mModern lLanguages and lLiterature", and I was. While looking for a job when aI received a call from a colleague from the University just called me in thethat November of the same year.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • One of the teacher of the school she was working for had to move to another city, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • One of the teacher ofs from the school she was working forat had to move to another city, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
    • One of the teachers of the school she was working for had to move to another city, and the pPrincipals wereas looking for someone to take her place.
    • One of the teacher ofs from the school where she was working for, had to move to another citaway, and the principals were looking for someone to take her place.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • During my university career, I made "One-to-One" lessons for high school students to rehearse grammar, to prove my teaching skills and to make a living.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • During my uUniversity careerdays, I made "One-to-One" lessons for high school students to rehearse grammar, to improve my teaching skills and to make a living.
    • During my university career, I made "One-to-One" lessons forwith high school students to rehearspractice grammar, to improve my teaching skills and to make a living.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • However, I had never had a class of my own to teach until that moment, so I wished to put myself on the line for the very first time with a real class.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • However, I had never hadtaught a class of my own to teach until that moment, so I wished to put myselfas put on the line for the very first time with a real class.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine and their classmates' judgment.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine and their classmates' judgment and mine.
    • Some of them felt ashamed of using their English knowledge to speak in public because they feared mine andthe judgement of their classmates' judgment. and my own
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • So during the lesson's practice time, I encouraged them to use their personal experience to make sentences useful to strengthen what they learned during the "presentation time." Moreover, I took advantage of my students' competitive side both to maintain their motivation and to challenge their memory at the end of the lesson.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • So during the lesson's practice time, I encouraged them to use their personal experience to make sentences useful tothat would strengthen what they had learned during the "presentation time." Moreover, I took advantage of my students' competitive side both to maintain their motivation and to challenge their memory at the end of the lesson.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
    • I used to split them into groups to play Word games, such as the classical " Hangman" or slightly modifying speaking activities such as " Guess where or who?" to let them show up not only their English skills but also their general knowledge as well.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I used to split them into groups to play Wword games, such as the classical " Hangman" or slightly modifying speaking activities such as " Guess where or who?" toThis let them show up not only their English skills, but also their general knowledge as well.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • Later, I started to work as an English teacher for an accounting school, and another challenge that waited for me was to face with dyslexic students.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Later, I started to work as an English teacher for an accounting school, and another challenge that awaited for me was to face witteach dyslexic students.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
    • I had never taught to one of them, and my universities didn't provide any course to teach students who had special needs.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I had never taught to one of thema dyslexic student before, and my universitiesy didn't provide any courses to teach students who had special needs.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17
    • Nevertheless thanks to my principals' suggestions I started to experiment some techniques based on " Visual skills" development.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Nevertheless, thanks to my principals' suggestions I started to experiment some techniques based on " Visual skills" development.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17
  • Frazo 18
  • Frazo 19
    • Also, I let them use the same flash cards to make them arrange their personal sentence, to get a proper feedback of what they had learned.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Also, I let them use the same flash cards to make them arrange their personal sentence, to get a proper feedback of what they had learnedt.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19
  • Frazo 20
    • Now I am trying to find out how to make macros with visual basic to create more interactive exercises for dyslexic students, but since I am not good at learning things by heart, my memory is struggling to remember the correct codes to use to make the macros work correctly.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Now I am trying to find out how to make macros with visual basics to create more interactive exercises for dyslexic students, but since I am not good at learning things by heart, my memory is struggling to remember the correct codes to used to make the macros work correctly.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20
  • Frazo 21
    • In conclusion, I believe to be a suitable candidate to apply for this position because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of trying new teaching techniques if they help my students to gain confidence in their abilities.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In conclusion, I believe to behat I am a suitable candidate to apply for this position. This is because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of trying new teaching techniques if they help my students to gain confidence in their abilities.
    • In conclusion, I believe to behat i am a suitable candidate to apply for this position because I am a methodical person this is true, but I am not afraid of. I am always willing trying new teaching techniques ifn they help my best interest of helping of students to gain confidence in their abilities.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 21ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 21