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  • CONCLUSION

    • All in all, it is clear that housewives today face a range of problems in regards to unequal benefits, disparagement their work done at home and being a housewife by natural obligation.
    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and possible solutions to improve the quality of life of housewives.
    • To do so, not only governments but also all society must change ideas, thoughts and policies in regard to being a housewife, in the same way consider the work at home and any other.
    • This way, the problem of older women are not receiving the same benefits as men in some countries might not disappear but probably improve.

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  • câu 1
    • All in all, it is clear that housewives today face a range of problems in regards to unequal benefits, disparagement their work done at home and being a housewife by natural obligation.
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    • All in all, it is clear that housewives today face a range of problems in regards to unequal benefits, disparagement of their work done at home and being a housewife by natural obligation.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and possible solutions to improve the quality of life of housewives.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and finding possible solutions to improve the quality of life of housewives.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • To do so, not only governments but also all society must change ideas, thoughts and policies in regard to being a housewife, in the same way consider the work at home and any other.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To do so, not only governments but also all of society must change their ideas, thoughts and policies in regard to being a housewife, in the same wayand consider the work at home andto be the same as any other job.
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  • câu 4
    • This way, the problem of older women are not receiving the same benefits as men in some countries might not disappear but probably improve.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This way, the problem of older women are not receiving the same benefits as men in some countries might not disappear butaltogether, but will probably improve.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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