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    • All in all, it is clear that housewives today face a range of problems in regards to unequal benefits, disparagement their work done at home and being a housewife by natural obligation.
    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and possible solutions to improve the quality of life of housewives.
    • To do so, not only governments but also all society must change ideas, thoughts and policies in regard to being a housewife, in the same way consider the work at home and any other.
    • This way, the problem of older women are not receiving the same benefits as men in some countries might not disappear but probably improve.

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    • All in all, it is clear that housewives today face a range of problems in regards to unequal benefits, disparagement their work done at home and being a housewife by natural obligation.
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    • All in all, it is clear that housewives today face a range of problems in regards to unequal benefits, disparagement of their work done at home and being a housewife by natural obligation.
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    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and possible solutions to improve the quality of life of housewives.
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    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and finding possible solutions to improve the quality of life of housewives.
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    • To do so, not only governments but also all society must change ideas, thoughts and policies in regard to being a housewife, in the same way consider the work at home and any other.
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    • To do so, not only governments but also all of society must change their ideas, thoughts and policies in regard to being a housewife, in the same wayand consider the work at home andto be the same as any other job.
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    • This way, the problem of older women are not receiving the same benefits as men in some countries might not disappear but probably improve.
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    • This way, the problem of older women are not receiving the same benefits as men in some countries might not disappear butaltogether, but will probably improve.
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