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• ) "The night was filled with slightly chilly air of early spring.

• The typical city's sounds, those of speeding cars, leaving behind choking, rushing skyward whiffs of dust, and people's constant buzzing chatter, were slowly dying away.

• Weakening hollow din was retreating, it seemed, to the distant, menacing outskirts, where it was kept in dark and damp, enormous underground chamber by some powerful, shadowlike guard until morning light..."