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    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to do an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience by working as a volunteer and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
    • I once had an experience in my town (i come from Lyon, in France).
    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
    • I helped them about two months during the winter.
    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around a coffee.
    • The main goal was to help them to do daily tasks, listen to them and that they feel well-integrated in the society.
    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches with personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
    • I read about the organisation and it advocates principles which are important to me (like solidarity or tolerance).
    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to put a religion foreground.
    • I think its a very open-minded organisation.
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’s exactly what I’d love to do).
    • I was really enthusiastic about living in a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, to share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to go there and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « real Vietnam ».
    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non touristic place, to live in a family and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part of.
    • I saw some documentaries and it seems to be a very beautiful country with its bay and its landscape.
    • I also imagine that the locals are very “warm”, kind, open-minded and helpful.
    • I also suppose it’s a country with many beautiful traditions and I’d like to discover them.
    • I think they respect their traditions, can live in harmony with nature, help each other’s, are generous and like to share.
    • I’d like to go there because honestly I’m a food-lover and I’d love to taste the Vietnamese specialities.
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take responsibilities, work in a very dynamic team.
    • I hope I really could do some projects for the children and spend a lot of time with them.
    • Secondly I also hope I could improve my skills in educational and health methods.
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied about my work because it would mean for me that work for an NGO isn’t for me and I would be very disappointed but otherwise I don’t have any other fears.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to do an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to doget an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience by working as a volunteer and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience is by working as a volunteer. and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos, (particularly in the social and education fields with women and children).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience is by working as a volunteer and. I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngowith NGOs (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur, (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around a coffee.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around ahaving coffee.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • The main goal was to help them to do daily tasks, listen to them and that they feel well-integrated in the society.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The main goal was to help them to do daily tasks, listen to them and thathelp theym feel well-integrated in the society.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The main goal was to help them to dowith daily tasks, listen to them and that they feelhelp them become well-integrated in the society.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches with personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches withmy personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I wanted to get involved in thata specific project in Vietnam because it matches with my personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • I read about the organisation and it advocates principles which are important to me (like solidarity or tolerance).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I read about the organisation and it advocates principles which are important to me, (like solidarity orand tolerance).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I read about the organisation and it advocates principles which are important to me (like solidarity orand tolerance).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to put a religion foreground.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to putbe in a religion foregroundus setting.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I also like the fact that’s it's a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to putbe in a religion foregroundus environment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
  • câu 12
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organizse activities and play with them.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’s exactly what I’d love to do).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and t. That’s exactly what I’d love to do).!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’ve also have read that the volunteers could have thmay have opportunityies to help out in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’which is exactly what I would love to do).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • I was really enthusiastic about living in a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, to share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was really enthusiastic about living inwith a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, tod and share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was reallyam enthusiastic about living inwith a host family becaussince that is the best way to be fully integrate, to - by shareing and to learning about the country, the habits of the people and the rich culture.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to go there and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to goabout going there, and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’Although I have never been in southwest Asia but I’, I have often thought to go there andabout visiting. As you are in the country, it could be a very good opportunity as afor volunteer because you’re in the countrying.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
  • câu 16
    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « real Vietnam ».
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I meanThat is to say, I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « "real Vietnam »".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go therewent as a tourist, I think Iprobably wouldn’ not have discovered the « "real" Vietnam ».
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
  • câu 17
    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non touristic place, to live in a family and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part of.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non -touristic places, to live inwith a family and to see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part ofin it every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To goIf I went with an association, it’s also gives me a chance to stay for a long timelonger and to discover non -touristic place,s; to live in awith a local family, and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part ofand get immersed in the daily Vietnamese way of life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
  • câu 18
    • I saw some documentaries and it seems to be a very beautiful country with its bay and its landscape.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I saw some documentaries and it seems to be a very beautiful country with its bays and its landscapes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
  • câu 19
  • câu 20
  • câu 21
    • I think they respect their traditions, can live in harmony with nature, help each other’s, are generous and like to share.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I think they respect their traditions, can live in harmony with nature, help each other’s, are generous and like to share.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21
  • câu 22
    • I’d like to go there because honestly I’m a food-lover and I’d love to taste the Vietnamese specialities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’d like to go there because, honestly, I’m a food-lover and I’d love to taste the Vietnamese specialities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’d like to go there because, honestly, I’m a food-lover and I’d love to taste the Vietnamese specialities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22
  • câu 23
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take responsibilities, work in a very dynamic team.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take on responsibilities, and work in a very dynamic team.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in an NGO, and that I could take on responsibilities, and get to work in a very dynamic team.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 23ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 23
  • câu 24
  • câu 25
  • câu 26
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied about my work because it would mean for me that work for an NGO isn’t for me and I would be very disappointed but otherwise I don’t have any other fears.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied aboutwith my work because it would mean for me. This may mean that work for an NGO isn’t for me, and I would be very disappointed but o. Otherwise, I don’t have any other fears. ¶
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’ not satisfied aboutwith my work because it would. This may mean for me that NGO work for an NGO isn’is not for me and. I would be very disappointed, but otherwise than that, I don’ not have any other fears. ¶
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26