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    • Ngos' coverletter

    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to do an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience by working as a volunteer and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
    • I once had an experience in my town (i come from Lyon, in France).
    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
    • I helped them about two months during the winter.
    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around a coffee.
    • The main goal was to help them to do daily tasks, listen to them and that they feel well-integrated in the society.
    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches with personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
    • I read about the organisation and it advocates principles which are important to me (like solidarity or tolerance).
    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to put a religion foreground.
    • I think its a very open-minded organisation.
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’s exactly what I’d love to do).
    • I was really enthusiastic about living in a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, to share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to go there and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « real Vietnam ».
    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non touristic place, to live in a family and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part of.
    • I saw some documentaries and it seems to be a very beautiful country with its bay and its landscape.
    • I also imagine that the locals are very “warm”, kind, open-minded and helpful.
    • I also suppose it’s a country with many beautiful traditions and I’d like to discover them.
    • I think they respect their traditions, can live in harmony with nature, help each other’s, are generous and like to share.
    • I’d like to go there because honestly I’m a food-lover and I’d love to taste the Vietnamese specialities.
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take responsibilities, work in a very dynamic team.
    • I hope I really could do some projects for the children and spend a lot of time with them.
    • Secondly I also hope I could improve my skills in educational and health methods.
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied about my work because it would mean for me that work for an NGO isn’t for me and I would be very disappointed but otherwise I don’t have any other fears.

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  • Satz 1
    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to do an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
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    • I wanted to get involved in an international voluntary project because I’d like to doget an MBA in NGOs Communication and Management in Germany.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1
  • Satz 2
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience by working as a volunteer and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
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    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience is by working as a volunteer. and I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngos, (particularly in the social and education fields with women and children).
    • I’d also like to learn new things and it’s the best way to gain experience is by working as a volunteer and. I’ve always been attracted to work for Ngowith NGOs (particularly in the social and education field with women and children).
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
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  • Satz 4
    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
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    • When I was in high school, I offered my services as a volunteer in the association of the Resto du cœur, (which provides meals for people in need and the homeless).
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4
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    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around a coffee.
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    • I worked in a kind of center which was like a supermarket and helped people to do their shopping and also spent a lot of time with them around ahaving coffee.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6
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  • Satz 8
    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches with personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
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    • I wanted to get involved in that specific project in Vietnam because it matches withmy personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
    • I wanted to get involved in thata specific project in Vietnam because it matches with my personality and expectations about working as a volunteer.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8
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    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to put a religion foreground.
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    • I also like the fact that’s its a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to putbe in a religion foregroundus setting.
    • I also like the fact that’s it's a non-religious organisation because I’m atheist and i would have felt myself uncomfortable if I had to putbe in a religion foregroundus environment.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10
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  • Satz 12
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
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    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organize activities and play with them.
    • I mainly wanted to work with children and when I read the mission I thought it could suit perfect to me because I like to organizse activities and play with them.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 12Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 12
  • Satz 13
    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’s exactly what I’d love to do).
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    • I’ve also read that the volunteers could have the opportunity to help in the orphanage near the hospital (and t. That’s exactly what I’d love to do).!
    • I’ve also have read that the volunteers could have thmay have opportunityies to help out in the orphanage near the hospital (and that’which is exactly what I would love to do).
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 13Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 13
  • Satz 14
    • I was really enthusiastic about living in a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, to share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
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    • I was really enthusiastic about living inwith a host family because that’s the best way to be fully integrate, tod and share and to learn about the country, the habits and the culture.
    • I was reallyam enthusiastic about living inwith a host family becaussince that is the best way to be fully integrate, to - by shareing and to learning about the country, the habits of the people and the rich culture.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 14Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 14
  • Satz 15
    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to go there and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
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    • I’ve never been in southwest Asia but I’ve often thought to goabout going there, and it could be a very good opportunity as a volunteer because you’re in the country.
    • I’Although I have never been in southwest Asia but I’, I have often thought to go there andabout visiting. As you are in the country, it could be a very good opportunity as afor volunteer because you’re in the countrying.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 15Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 15
  • Satz 16
    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « real Vietnam ».
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    • I meanThat is to say, I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go there as a tourist I think I wouldn’t have discovered the « "real Vietnam »".
    • I mean I waited for an opportunity like this because if I had to go therewent as a tourist, I think Iprobably wouldn’ not have discovered the « "real" Vietnam ».
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 16Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 16
  • Satz 17
    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non touristic place, to live in a family and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part of.
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    • To go with an association, it’s also a chance to stay for a long time and to discover non -touristic places, to live inwith a family and to see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part ofin it every day.
    • To goIf I went with an association, it’s also gives me a chance to stay for a long timelonger and to discover non -touristic place,s; to live in awith a local family, and see every day the Vietnamese way of life and take fully part ofand get immersed in the daily Vietnamese way of life.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 17Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 17
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  • Satz 23
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take responsibilities, work in a very dynamic team.
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    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in a NGO and that I could take on responsibilities, and work in a very dynamic team.
    • First of all, I hope I could learn a lot about working in an NGO, and that I could take on responsibilities, and get to work in a very dynamic team.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 23Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 23
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  • Satz 26
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied about my work because it would mean for me that work for an NGO isn’t for me and I would be very disappointed but otherwise I don’t have any other fears.
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    • My main fear would be if the association isn’t satisfied aboutwith my work because it would mean for me. This may mean that work for an NGO isn’t for me, and I would be very disappointed but o. Otherwise, I don’t have any other fears. ¶
    • My main fear would be if the association isn’ not satisfied aboutwith my work because it would. This may mean for me that NGO work for an NGO isn’is not for me and. I would be very disappointed, but otherwise than that, I don’ not have any other fears. ¶
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 26Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 26