Korekty

Text from 1_Dimon - English

  • Attempt 1

    • According to surveys - all of us are human beings and likely ability of socialize and communicate have been aligning to our nature, since a mankind was born.
    • Tools of communication, like verbal and oral interaction skills , have been polishing and constantly honing since our foundation time.
    • Vast innovations in area of media, evidently affects on utilized humankind's methods of receiving information.
    • People produces wide steps forward in technician areas as well as in methods of communication and receiving information.
  • The conceptions as a trade, a market shoves generation to fully immerse into era of TV and Internet devices of advertisement, which are meanwhile gradually has been substituting obsolete values as direct contact.
  • I can say it shoves or displaces them.
    • In my view, spelling that TV destroyed communication is profoundly hyperbolized.
    • For the pointed question, I rather make a rephrase like "Tv changes communication style".
  • With accepting a idea of proverb " Who posses information, posses world", 21 century let us pursuing the inexorable race for cultivating idols of digesting a ton of information, worshipping to the ratio between number word's received and time spent for this process.
  • Therefore, such as created properties upbrings in people intension to absorb data using TV, Internet, because for obtaining those information we can spend less energy and even do not need to go out from place of living.
  • However, simultaneously with this frame, we are nurturing a process of asserting more and more periods without live contact and waste a less time in participation in a real negotiation.
    • It lets the vital conversation stands behind technologies and progress .
  • Also, I believe that with time passed by, humankind settled and bounded things, that brings comfort condition and provide us with information.
  • Actually, I premise that the substitution TV with real communication would not look affordable for several people.
  • Habit of wasting less power in order to obtain more information has been already plugged into algorithm of our actions and there is nothing to be astonished of.
  • Mankind consumes the crops of nature's law, and we should work with facts, neither neglect and complain about them.
  • For example, avoiding TV also impels us stay in stress and anxious after work day.
  • At least some part of brain periodically persuades us for applying new and peculiar type of leisure, and for some of us contemplation a TV screen in abundance of information flows is the most relaxing thing.
  • By the way of conclusion, I am being up with the phrase "TV kills communication", but almost the situation needs to be rephrased "TV changed style of communication and receiving information".
  • Obviously, we bumped with circumstances of invention plenty electronically devices that are devoted to make our life easier, making our existence serenely.
  • In 21 century, Mankind is aimed and compelled with intention of gathering data about environment due to reducing the time and delays among real connections.
  • And specifically for this ambient state, TV, and social media sphere in generally, accelerates information's consume process.
  • The process of renovation walks with destroying obsolete methods of past mankind interaction, through replacing and revealing new sources and dimensions for development.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • According to surveys - all of us are human beings and likely ability of socialize and communicate have been aligning to our nature, since a mankind was born.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • According to surveys -, all of us are human beings, and likelythe ability tof socialize and communicate haves likely been aligning toed with our nature, since a mankind was born.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • Tools of communication, like verbal and oral interaction skills , have been polishing and constantly honing since our foundation time.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Tools of communication, like verbal and oral interaction skills , have been polishinged and constantly honinged since our foundation time.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • The conceptions as a trade, a market shoves generation to fully immerse into era of TV and Internet devices of advertisement, which are meanwhile gradually has been substituting obsolete values as direct contact.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • With accepting a idea of proverb " Who posses information, posses world", 21 century let us pursuing the inexorable race for cultivating idols of digesting a ton of information, worshipping to the ratio between number word's received and time spent for this process.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • Therefore, such as created properties upbrings in people intension to absorb data using TV, Internet, because for obtaining those information we can spend less energy and even do not need to go out from place of living.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • However, simultaneously with this frame, we are nurturing a process of asserting more and more periods without live contact and waste a less time in participation in a real negotiation.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
  • Zdanie 13
    • Also, I believe that with time passed by, humankind settled and bounded things, that brings comfort condition and provide us with information.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13
  • Zdanie 14
  • Zdanie 15
    • Habit of wasting less power in order to obtain more information has been already plugged into algorithm of our actions and there is nothing to be astonished of.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15
  • Zdanie 16
  • Zdanie 17
  • Zdanie 18
    • At least some part of brain periodically persuades us for applying new and peculiar type of leisure, and for some of us contemplation a TV screen in abundance of information flows is the most relaxing thing.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18
  • Zdanie 19
    • By the way of conclusion, I am being up with the phrase "TV kills communication", but almost the situation needs to be rephrased "TV changed style of communication and receiving information".
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 19DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 19
  • Zdanie 20
    • Obviously, we bumped with circumstances of invention plenty electronically devices that are devoted to make our life easier, making our existence serenely.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20
  • Zdanie 21
    • In 21 century, Mankind is aimed and compelled with intention of gathering data about environment due to reducing the time and delays among real connections.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 21DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 21
  • Zdanie 22
    • And specifically for this ambient state, TV, and social media sphere in generally, accelerates information's consume process.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 22DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 22
  • Zdanie 23
    • The process of renovation walks with destroying obsolete methods of past mankind interaction, through replacing and revealing new sources and dimensions for development.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 23DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 23