Correccions

AJUDI A CORREGIR ARA!No corregit

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  • Remain in paid employment.

  • In Spain, the age of retirement has been of 65 until reciently, that have been increased up to 67 years.
  • This is a fact tat with the new medical discoveres and the improvement of the style of eat habits and a beeter way of life, the life expectancy has been increased in many years.
  • A modern country must find the way to combine the welfare state, and how the eldery people have the right of enjoying the rest of their life, rihts that they have gained, and the effect that the increase of life expectancy could prodece in the budget of the moderns countries.
  • In my opinion, the improvement of the quality of life should be applicated in a beeter way of life of the citizens, or, at least, this sould be the tend that the goverment should apply.

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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  • Oració 1
  • Oració 2
    • This is a fact tat with the new medical discoveres and the improvement of the style of eat habits and a beeter way of life, the life expectancy has been increased in many years.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 2Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 2
  • Oració 3
    • A modern country must find the way to combine the welfare state, and how the eldery people have the right of enjoying the rest of their life, rihts that they have gained, and the effect that the increase of life expectancy could prodece in the budget of the moderns countries.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3
  • Oració 4
    • In my opinion, the improvement of the quality of life should be applicated in a beeter way of life of the citizens, or, at least, this sould be the tend that the goverment should apply.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4