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BANTU PERBAIKI SEKARANG JUGATidak dikoreksi

Pesan dari Kasahara - English

  • Remain in paid employment.

  • In Spain, the age of retirement has been of 65 until reciently, that have been increased up to 67 years.
  • This is a fact tat with the new medical discoveres and the improvement of the style of eat habits and a beeter way of life, the life expectancy has been increased in many years.
  • A modern country must find the way to combine the welfare state, and how the eldery people have the right of enjoying the rest of their life, rihts that they have gained, and the effect that the increase of life expectancy could prodece in the budget of the moderns countries.
  • In my opinion, the improvement of the quality of life should be applicated in a beeter way of life of the citizens, or, at least, this sould be the tend that the goverment should apply.

TOLONG, BANTUANNYA UNTUK MEMBENARKAN SETIAP KALIMAT! - English

  • Judul
  • Kalimat 1
  • Kalimat 2
    • This is a fact tat with the new medical discoveres and the improvement of the style of eat habits and a beeter way of life, the life expectancy has been increased in many years.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
  • Kalimat 3
    • A modern country must find the way to combine the welfare state, and how the eldery people have the right of enjoying the rest of their life, rihts that they have gained, and the effect that the increase of life expectancy could prodece in the budget of the moderns countries.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
  • Kalimat 4
    • In my opinion, the improvement of the quality of life should be applicated in a beeter way of life of the citizens, or, at least, this sould be the tend that the goverment should apply.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4