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Hyperspeed glider
- Different from the other around me.
- I was very excited while my friend so scared.
- I shouted and looked everything in my view. Wonderful!

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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hyperspeed glider
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Different from the other around me.
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- DI am different from the other people around me.
  ScottDC Ulasan
  
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- DI am different from the ~~other~~people around me. (OR) I am different from others.
  Onealio Ulasan
  
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- Different from the other ones around me.
  AjayKumar Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I was very excited while my friend so scared.
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- I was very excited, while my friend waso scared.
  Onealio Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I shouted and looked everything in my view. Wonderful!
  Undi sekarang!
- I shouted and looked at everything in my view. Wonderful!
  ScottDC Ulasan
  
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  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3