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Hyperspeed glider
- Different from the other around me.
- I was very excited while my friend so scared.
- I shouted and looked everything in my view. Wonderful!

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

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- Hyperspeed glider
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句子 1
- Different from the other around me.
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- DI am different from the other people around me.
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- DI am different from the ~~other~~people around me. (OR) I am different from others.
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- Different from the other ones around me.
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句子 2
- I was very excited while my friend so scared.
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- I was very excited, while my friend waso scared.
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句子 3
- I shouted and looked everything in my view. Wonderful!
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- I shouted and looked at everything in my view. Wonderful!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3