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    • Unsually day

    • Talking about my day, one beauty day to finish the holy week celebrated in my town.
    • Erly in the morning everything looks normal, the same sun touching my windows telling me is time to take a shower.
    • I did it complacent, but suddenly I remembered "Today is sunday", my mates were planned an event so all the people who want to practice slackline in the Sabana park.
  • So without breakfast I went there, all the day we stay jumping, walking in the line.
    • But everybody went no just to practice slackline, as well people who practice Telas, Clavas and the funny ula-ula.
    • I use all of it, but late afternoon some guy came with an German weel, I looked the uncanny thing and ask him: what is that?
    • He explain to me, so wishful I start to prepare myself to use this thing, the fist time I do not put my feets ok so I fell, the secong try was even more funny because I achive to turn the weel but in the end already finish my trick I fell again.
    • All there stared to laugh, also me just it was so funny.
    • Some times we just have to smile to bad things and believe the it is not to bad, we can learn something about everything.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Erly in the morning everything looks normal, the same sun touching my windows telling me is time to take a shower.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Early in the morning everything looks normal, the same sun touching my windows telling mes me it is time to take a shower.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I did it complacent, but suddenly I remembered "Today is sunday", my mates were planned an event so all the people who want to practice slackline in the Sabana park.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I did it complacentlazily, but then suddenly I remembered "Today is sSunday!", my mates werehad planned an event sofor all the people who want to practice slackline in the Sabana park.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • But everybody went no just to practice slackline, as well people who practice Telas, Clavas and the funny ula-ula.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But everybody went not just to practice slackline, as welllso people who practice Telas, Clavas and the funny ula-ula.
    • But everybody went no just to practice slackline, as well as people who practice Telas, Clavas and the funny ula-ula.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I use all of it, but late afternoon some guy came with an German weel, I looked the uncanny thing and ask him: what is that?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I used all of it, but later in the afternoon some guy came with an German wheel, I looked at the uncannystrange thing and asked him: what is that?
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • He explain to me, so wishful I start to prepare myself to use this thing, the fist time I do not put my feets ok so I fell, the secong try was even more funny because I achive to turn the weel but in the end already finish my trick I fell again.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He explained it to me, so wishful I started to prepare myself to use this thing, the first time I do noidn't put my feets ok properly so I fell, the secongd try was even more funny because I achivemanaged to turn the wheel but in the en ad already finished my trick and I fell again.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Some times we just have to smile to bad things and believe the it is not to bad, we can learn something about everything.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Some times we just have to smile ato bad things and believe theat it i's not too bad, we can learn something aboutfrom everything.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9