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  • Summary

    • The action of the story takes place in the dirty room.
    • The story is about the man in love.
    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits the chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
    • But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old man.
    • This love potion used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
    • But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" so that it would help him in the future.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits the chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits thea chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana, who doesn't correspond to his feelings.He visits thea chemist, whoich shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
      Brunna092Brunna092 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old man.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But Alan was very much interested in buying the '' Love potion" sold by the old man so that he could use it on his lover sold by the old man.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old mansold by the old man so that he could try it with his lover one.
      Brunna092Brunna092 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • This love potion used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This love potion was dramatically used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This love potion used togot increased dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
      Brunna092Brunna092 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" so that it would help him in the future.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" also so that it would help him in the future.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6