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    • The action of the story takes place in the dirty room.
    • The story is about the man in love.
    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits the chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
    • But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old man.
    • This love potion used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
    • But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" so that it would help him in the future.

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    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits the chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
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    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits thea chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
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    • He is in love with a young woman named Diana, who doesn't correspond to his feelings.He visits thea chemist, whoich shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
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  • 문장 4
    • But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old man.
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    • But Alan was very much interested in buying the '' Love potion" sold by the old man so that he could use it on his lover sold by the old man.
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    • But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old mansold by the old man so that he could try it with his lover one.
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  • 문장 5
    • This love potion used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
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    • This love potion was dramatically used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
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    • This love potion used togot increased dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
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    • But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" so that it would help him in the future.
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    • But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" also so that it would help him in the future.
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