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Thanks four your help Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned about your offer for a sales consultant intern who should have started since January 1st.

With this letter, I have the pleasure to offer you my application for this work placement from May 1st.

(as I have a work placement to do for school) Sophisticated and innovative at the same time, XXX is for me a brand which embody all the values of the french fashion industry and which better expresses what is luxe today : the inventiveness and the importance of the rigourness regarding innovation, the opulence, the sensitive and the unrivalled.

With a first experience in the ready-to-wear as saleswoman, in XXX, I would like to pursue next to you, in order to get prepared for a luxe career.

Furthermore, improving my english by working for a shop that I love, will certainly be the best experience ever.

Attached to the elegance, the politeness, the discretion and the good work, I would like to place all my energy at the disposal of your customer base.

Other qualities like the punctuality, the serious and the integrity will be profitable to me doing this job.

I hope to have soon the chance to show you in person, my motivations during an interview.