Korrigjime

NDIHMO NË KORIGJIM TANI!korrigjuar

Tekst nga Luisr_ramirez - English

  • First try.

    • Three years had passed since the first time time I try to create a startup.
    • By that a protest at national universities was taking places, we haven't any class but a lot of free time, that sounds like the right place to start a business right?
    • After several ideas and some discussions we decided; a crowdfunding platform is the right idea, it will make us rich.
    • By that time there was an enormous hype about this platforms, or at least that was our impression, and not much people in the country was aware of this new technique of doing business, we can take a big part of the pie.
    • In retrospective several errors were make it.
    • The first one was to much talk, we spend an infinite amount of time discussing how far the project will get and which cool new features it will have.
    • Of course we were very cautious about talk with other people about our project, some one could steal our plan, so we received just a little amount of feedback.

JU LUTEM NDIHMONI PËR TË KORIGJUAR ÇDO FJALI! - English

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    • By that a protest at national universities was taking places, we haven't any class but a lot of free time, that sounds like the right place to start a business right?
      Votoni tani!
    • ByAt that atime protests at national universities wasere taking places, we. We didn't haven't any class but a lot of free time, t. That sounds like the right place to start a business right ?
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komente
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    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 2SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 2
  • Fjalia 3
    • After several ideas and some discussions we decided; a crowdfunding platform is the right idea, it will make us rich.
      Votoni tani!
    • After several ideas and some discussions we decided; that a crowd funding platform is the right idea, it will make us rich.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • After several ideas and some discussions, we decided; that a crowdfunding platform iwas the righbest idea, it will. It would make us rich.
      AnomikaAnomika profile picture Komente 1
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 3SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 3
  • Fjalia 4
    • By that time there was an enormous hype about this platforms, or at least that was our impression, and not much people in the country was aware of this new technique of doing business, we can take a big part of the pie.
      Votoni tani!
    • By that time there was an enormous hype about this platforms, or at least that was our impression, a. And not muchany people in the country wasere aware of this new technique of doing business, w. We can take a big partiece of the pie.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 4SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 4
  • Fjalia 5
  • Fjalia 6
    • The first one was to much talk, we spend an infinite amount of time discussing how far the project will get and which cool new features it will have.
      Votoni tani!
    • The first one was to much talk, wtalk much. We spendt an infinite amount of time discussing how far the project will geto and which cool new features it will have.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 6SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 6
  • Fjalia 7
    • Of course we were very cautious about talk with other people about our project, some one could steal our plan, so we received just a little amount of feedback.
      Votoni tani!
    • Of course we were very cautious about talking with other people about our project, s. Some one could steal our plan, so we received just a little amount of feedback.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 7SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 7