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Text from Luisr_ramirez - English

  • First try.

    • Three years had passed since the first time time I try to create a startup.
    • By that a protest at national universities was taking places, we haven't any class but a lot of free time, that sounds like the right place to start a business right?
    • After several ideas and some discussions we decided; a crowdfunding platform is the right idea, it will make us rich.
    • By that time there was an enormous hype about this platforms, or at least that was our impression, and not much people in the country was aware of this new technique of doing business, we can take a big part of the pie.
    • In retrospective several errors were make it.
    • The first one was to much talk, we spend an infinite amount of time discussing how far the project will get and which cool new features it will have.
    • Of course we were very cautious about talk with other people about our project, some one could steal our plan, so we received just a little amount of feedback.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • By that a protest at national universities was taking places, we haven't any class but a lot of free time, that sounds like the right place to start a business right?
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ByAt that atime protests at national universities wasere taking places, we. We didn't haven't any class but a lot of free time, t. That sounds like the right place to start a business right ?
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • After several ideas and some discussions we decided; a crowdfunding platform is the right idea, it will make us rich.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • After several ideas and some discussions we decided; that a crowd funding platform is the right idea, it will make us rich.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • After several ideas and some discussions, we decided; that a crowdfunding platform iwas the righbest idea, it will. It would make us rich.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • By that time there was an enormous hype about this platforms, or at least that was our impression, and not much people in the country was aware of this new technique of doing business, we can take a big part of the pie.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • By that time there was an enormous hype about this platforms, or at least that was our impression, a. And not muchany people in the country wasere aware of this new technique of doing business, w. We can take a big partiece of the pie.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • The first one was to much talk, we spend an infinite amount of time discussing how far the project will get and which cool new features it will have.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The first one was to much talk, wtalk much. We spendt an infinite amount of time discussing how far the project will geto and which cool new features it will have.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • Of course we were very cautious about talk with other people about our project, some one could steal our plan, so we received just a little amount of feedback.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Of course we were very cautious about talking with other people about our project, s. Some one could steal our plan, so we received just a little amount of feedback.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7