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  • Thanks in advance for your corrections.
  • =) Dear Mr XXX: I am writing to inquire about internship opportunities at company name.
    • I’m currently doing my third year degree course in networking and hardware at the MYUNIVERSITY My degree course is a co-op program.
    • Thanks to this program, I am fortunate to work since august in MYCOMPANY as a maintenance technician.
  • I will finish my studies at the end of September and I would like to work in your company then.
    • The different internship that I’ve done results in strong knowledge of system and networking administration.
    • This co-op year with MYCOMPANY is highly beneficial to me because I learn how to work efficiently with the utmost professionalism.
    • On the other side, I better know the IT service management such as the ITIL one, the corporate communication and the data center process.
    • Naturally, I also develop my ability to administrate and repair network and system As you can see in my resume I’m French and I don’t currently live in the U.S territory.
    • Nevertheless I’m eligible for a J-1 Visa which will allow me to work as an intern for a period of maximum 18 months.
  • The visa sponsor organization that I have contacted can assist you in the visa sponsorship process if you need it.
  • I believe my educational background and work experience are a good match for an internship at company name, and I would be a dedicated member of the team.
  • I welcome the opportunity to talk with you about potential opportunities, and can be reached at PHONENUMBER or via email.
    • Yours sincerely,

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    • I’m currently doing my third year degree course in networking and hardware at the MYUNIVERSITY My degree course is a co-op program.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • I’ am currently doing my third year degree course in networking and hardware at the MYUNIVERSITY. My degree course is a co-op program.
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    • The different internship that I’ve done results in strong knowledge of system and networking administration.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • The different internships that I’ve done have completed resultsed in a strong knowledge of system and networking administration.
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      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • This co-op year with MYCOMPANY is highly beneficial to me because I learn how to work efficiently with the utmost professionalism.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • This co-op year with MYCOMPANY is highly beneficial to me because I am learning how to work efficiently with the utmost professionalism.
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      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • On the other side, I better know the IT service management such as the ITIL one, the corporate communication and the data center process.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • On the other side, I better know theI now have a better understanding of IT service management such as the ITIL one, the, corporate communication, and the data center processes.
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      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • Naturally, I also develop my ability to administrate and repair network and system As you can see in my resume I’m French and I don’t currently live in the U.S territory.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Naturally, I am also developing my ability to administrater and repair networks and systems.¶¶As you can see in my resume, I’m French and I don’ not currently live in the U.S. territory.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • Nevertheless I’m eligible for a J-1 Visa which will allow me to work as an intern for a period of maximum 18 months.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Nevertheless, I’ am eligible for a J-1 Visa which will allow me to work as an intern for a maximum period of maximum 18 months.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • The visa sponsor organization that I have contacted can assist you in the visa sponsorship process if you need it.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • I believe my educational background and work experience are a good match for an internship at company name, and I would be a dedicated member of the team.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
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    • I welcome the opportunity to talk with you about potential opportunities, and can be reached at PHONENUMBER or via email.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
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