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  • My cover letter sample

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  • =) Dear Mr XXX: I am writing to inquire about internship opportunities at company name.
    • I’m currently doing my third year degree course in networking and hardware at the MYUNIVERSITY My degree course is a co-op program.
    • Thanks to this program, I am fortunate to work since august in MYCOMPANY as a maintenance technician.
  • I will finish my studies at the end of September and I would like to work in your company then.
    • The different internship that I’ve done results in strong knowledge of system and networking administration.
    • This co-op year with MYCOMPANY is highly beneficial to me because I learn how to work efficiently with the utmost professionalism.
    • On the other side, I better know the IT service management such as the ITIL one, the corporate communication and the data center process.
    • Naturally, I also develop my ability to administrate and repair network and system As you can see in my resume I’m French and I don’t currently live in the U.S territory.
    • Nevertheless I’m eligible for a J-1 Visa which will allow me to work as an intern for a period of maximum 18 months.
  • The visa sponsor organization that I have contacted can assist you in the visa sponsorship process if you need it.
  • I believe my educational background and work experience are a good match for an internship at company name, and I would be a dedicated member of the team.
  • I welcome the opportunity to talk with you about potential opportunities, and can be reached at PHONENUMBER or via email.
    • Yours sincerely,

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