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    • Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
  • Today, almost everyone holds the idea that owning a car is a big comfort.
    • Owning a car means to be able to go everywhere and when desired without relying on the timetable of pubblic transport.
    • But owning a car is really so advantageous?
    • If there were other and better possibilities would be cars seen as a comfort?
    • Take a rail network that connects the suburban to the center, that works very well and that offers discounts to those, who travel for work or study as an example.
    • Who would give up on this kind of comfort to drive a car and being stressed because is stuck in the traffic or because doesn't find a parking?
    • Or, who would like to take the car when in the center of the city there is a very good system of bike sharing that allows to move around the center without polluting and with the additional advantage of staying in shape?
  • Furthermore, who would give up on taking a sky train knowing there is no risk of being late since its rails are not on the roads?
    • When looking at these examples, it is obvious that if governements invested in pubblic transport or in alternative ways of transport the number of the cars on the roads would significantly decrease.
    • There are a lot of kind of stress in everyone's everyday life and if a developped and improved pubblic transport could avoid the stress of being stuck in the traffic most of people would take this chance with both hands.
    • Besides, today many people are sensiblized to the themes of pollution and environment and if it is easy and accessible for them to use alternative forms of transport environment friendly (bike sharing, electric car), they will use them.
    • Thus, the teory that improved ways of transport and the approachability of alternative forms of transport would help to reduce the number of cars on the roads, is difficult to debunk.
    • In contrast, the introduction of international laws to control car ownership and use wouldn't allow to reach the desired effect.
  • They would be seen as a limitation to personal freedom and the car would not be used not because there are other possibilities but because it is forced by law and moreover a person would fight for his right to use his car because there isn't another possibility to go where he needs.
    • Therefore, it can be concluded that alternative ways of transport and the improvement of pubblic transport would decrease the number of cars on the roads and the collaterla damages they cause.

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    • Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. tTo what extendt do you agree or disagree?
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    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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    • Owning a car means to be able to go everywhere and when desired without relying on the timetable of pubblic transport.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Owning a car means to be able to go everyravel where and when desired without relying on the timetable of pubblic transport.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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    • Take a rail network that connects the suburban to the center, that works very well and that offers discounts to those, who travel for work or study as an example.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Take a rail network that connects the suburbans to the center, thafor example. It works very well and that offers discounts to those, who travel for work or study as an example.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre 1
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6
  • veta 7
    • Who would give up on this kind of comfort to drive a car and being stressed because is stuck in the traffic or because doesn't find a parking?
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Who would give up on this kind of comfort in order to drive a car and beingcome stressed because isdue to being stuck in the traffic or because doesn'tnot being able to find a parking space?
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
  • veta 8
    • Or, who would like to take the car when in the center of the city there is a very good system of bike sharing that allows to move around the center without polluting and with the additional advantage of staying in shape?
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Or, who would likeprefer to take the car when in the center of the city there is a very good system of bike sharing that allows people to move around the center without polluting and with the additional advantage of staying in shape?
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8
  • veta 9
    • Furthermore, who would give up on taking a sky train knowing there is no risk of being late since its rails are not on the roads?
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 9
  • veta 10
    • When looking at these examples, it is obvious that if governements invested in pubblic transport or in alternative ways of transport the number of the cars on the roads would significantly decrease.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • When looking at these examples, it is obvious that if governements invested in pubblic transport or in alternative ways of transport the number of the cars on the roads would significantly decrease.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 10PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 10
  • veta 11
    • There are a lot of kind of stress in everyone's everyday life and if a developped and improved pubblic transport could avoid the stress of being stuck in the traffic most of people would take this chance with both hands.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • There are a lot ofmany kinds of stress in everyone's everyday life, and if a developped and improved pubblic transport could avoid the stress of being stuck in the traffic most of people would take this chance with both handsopportunity without a second thought.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre 1
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 11
  • veta 12
    • Besides, today many people are sensiblized to the themes of pollution and environment and if it is easy and accessible for them to use alternative forms of transport environment friendly (bike sharing, electric car), they will use them.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Besides, today many people are sensibltized to the themes of pollution and environment and if it is easy and accessible for them to use alternative forms of transport environmentally friendly transport (bike sharing, electric car), they will use them.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 12
  • veta 13
    • Thus, the teory that improved ways of transport and the approachability of alternative forms of transport would help to reduce the number of cars on the roads, is difficult to debunk.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Thus, the theory that improved ways of transport and the approachability of alternative forms of transport would help to reduce the number of cars on the roads, is difficult to debunk.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 13PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 13
  • veta 14
    • In contrast, the introduction of international laws to control car ownership and use wouldn't allow to reach the desired effect.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • In contrast, the introduction of international laws to control car ownership and use wouldn't allow to reach the desired effect.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14
  • veta 15
    • They would be seen as a limitation to personal freedom and the car would not be used not because there are other possibilities but because it is forced by law and moreover a person would fight for his right to use his car because there isn't another possibility to go where he needs.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 15PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 15
  • veta 16
    • Therefore, it can be concluded that alternative ways of transport and the improvement of pubblic transport would decrease the number of cars on the roads and the collaterla damages they cause.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • Therefore, it can be concluded that alternative ways of transport and the improvement of pubblic transport would decrease the number of cars on the roads and the collaterlal damages they cause.
      ScottDCScottDC profile picture Komentáre 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16