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Hello, I put ... instead of the company's name.

Thank you for helping Hello, " Her the slogan of the brand " In a few words, this sentence is the main reason for what I would like to work for ... .

I am passionate for beautiful things, I do like big commercials centres and the luxurious' world.

I have to do an internship (in retail) because I am a french first year business school student, it will be the first time that I will work as sales associate ; and I want this first experience to be an unforgettable one.

I chose ... because it is firstly located in the United Kingdom, which is a country I like for its way of living, for the tea, then ... gather many luxurious shops.

I have read about what old ... workers said about ...

, and comments are such inciting.