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    • Tell a company why would I like to work for them

    • Hello, I put ... instead of the company's name.
    • Thank you for helping Hello, " Her the slogan of the brand " In a few words, this sentence is the main reason for what I would like to work for ... .
    • I am passionate for beautiful things, I do like big commercials centres and the luxurious' world.
    • I have to do an internship (in retail) because I am a french first year business school student, it will be the first time that I will work as sales associate ; and I want this first experience to be an unforgettable one.
    • I chose ... because it is firstly located in the United Kingdom, which is a country I like for its way of living, for the tea, then ... gather many luxurious shops.
    • I have read about what old ... workers said about ...
    • , and comments are such inciting.

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    • Thank you for helping Hello, " Her the slogan of the brand " In a few words, this sentence is the main reason for what I would like to work for ... .
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    • Thank you for helping¶¶Hello,¶" Her¶Hello,¶" Here I will write the slogan of the brand " In a few words, this sentence is the main reason for what I would like to work for ... .
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    • Thank you for helping¶¶Hello,¶" Here the slogan of the brand " In a few words, this sentence is the main reason for whatwhy I would like to work for ... .
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    • I am passionate for beautiful things, I do like big commercials centres and the luxurious' world.
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    • I am passionate forabout beautiful things, I do like big commercials centres and the luxurious' worldworld of luxury.
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    • I am passionate forabout beautiful things,. I do like big commercials centres and the luxurious' world.es of the world.¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
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    • I have to do an internship (in retail) because I am a french first year business school student, it will be the first time that I will work as sales associate ; and I want this first experience to be an unforgettable one.
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    • I have to do an internship (in retail) because I am a fFrench first -year business school student, i. It will be the first time that I will work as a sales associate ;, and I want this first experience to be an unforgettable one.
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    • I have to do an internship (in retail) because I am a french first year business school student, in France. It will be the first time that I will work as a sales associate ; and I want this first experience to be an unforgettable one for me.
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    • I chose ... because it is firstly located in the United Kingdom, which is a country I like for its way of living, for the tea, then ... gather many luxurious shops.
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    • The first reason I chose ... is because it is firstly located in the United Kingdom, which is a country I like. I like the UK for its way of living, for the tea, then ... gather many luxurious shops.
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    • I chose ... because it is firstly it is located in the United Kingdom, which is a country I like for its way of living, for the tea,. And then ... gatherit has many luxurious shops.
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