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The problem of fast food
- People`s attitude to eating out can be quite different: for some of them fast food is the only way to eat tasty and quickly, but others consider it is too unhealthy food.
- In my opinion, people should eat healthy food.
- First and foremost, eating out it`s harmful for peoples` health, it can lead to health problems such as high blood pressure, heart disease.
- Let us draw the attention to the USA, there are many eateries, for example McDonalds, Wendy`s, Burger King, which have an influx of buyers every day.
- People eat more and more and don`t think about harm their health.
- Secondly, fast food is a cause of overweight because prepared food such as hamburgers, cheeseburgers, sandwiches, muffins contains saturated fat.
- One should, nevertheless, consider the problem from another angle.
- Some people eat out.
- It is convenient for them because they have an opportunity not to waste of time.
- Moreover, they find fast food delicious enough.
- I don`t agree with this point of view because eating out becomes a kind of addiction for people, who often go to the eateries.
- To sum it up, we should try to avoid fast food and eat healthy food.
- People may face serious problems of our health if they aren`t to be careful of it.
- Arimolukina
March 2013
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