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  • A roommate's characteristics.

  • PS: The essay was written in 30 min.
  • Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university.
  • What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?
    • Use spe-cific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
    • Study is an amazing experience in life.
  • Most of the people have studied and attended schools and universities.
    • It would definitely help students to learn about life about different situations, especially if students had the opportunity to share a housing with other individuals who are studying with them.
    • There are many qualities for the people who would live with you while being in dormitory, I will share two of the main characteristics for a good person to have room with.
    • Firstly, it would be an ideal decision, if you had a person similar to you.
    • This would help you to have less arguements whenever you open any topic to discuss.
    • It would also encourage you to speak about any issue without worrying about the other's thoughts since you posses the same ideas about politics, music, and movies.
    • For example, when I started my first year in university in Batna 5 years ago, I had to roomate a person that I do not from before.
    • After some time sitting together, it turned out that we have different beliefs about life, and we had disagreements in many topics we opened to speak about.
    • I could not stay for long with him, so I had to look for another partner who is willing to share the aparement with me.
    • After some researches that I made, I found a person who is studying civil engineering whereas I was studying safety engineering.
    • Beside the point that we have different branches, it was an ideal person to live with due to the similarities that we had together.
    • I had passed with him one of best moments in hanging outside time to time, traveling to different places in summer.
  • As you can see, an identical individual would absolutely be an ideal person to live with.
    • The second quality is the person should be trustworthy, also being an open minded as well.
    • It would not let you settle down in your new room with somone that you do not trust.
    • As each time being worried, and skeptical about this student that you're sharing four walls with.
    • For instance, my friend who was staying with me during my studies.
    • He told me once, when were talking about the characteristic a student must have in order to be with is saying the truth.
    • He brought to the discussion that we were having a story happened to him before he meet with me, that he lived with a guy who was weird most of the time being with him in his room.
    • Each time he put doubt in himself, which made my friend worry about his money and stuff that he's leaving behind him each time whenever he go attend his classes.
    • Due to the charge been built up, it made my mate to quite the room with this bizarre person and look for another one in order to have a peaceful life.
    • To conclude, life is full of adventures, and without a shadow of a doubt the life of the university is the most interesting one.
    • A person would learn how to pick up his friends, and especially his partner that he's going to live with.
    • There are two major qualities an individual should look for while looking for a person to share a housing with, which they are similarity, and honesty.
  • I highly encourage students to pick up on these two main aspects before living with any stranger.

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    • It would definitely help students to learn about life about different situations, especially if students had the opportunity to share a housing with other individuals who are studying with them.
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    • It would definitely help students to learn about life and (about) different situations, especially if students had the opportunity to share a housing with other individuals who are studying with them.
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    • There are many qualities for the people who would live with you while being in dormitory, I will share two of the main characteristics for a good person to have room with.
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    • There are many qualities for the people who would live with you while being in a college dorm(itory), I will share two of the main characteristics for a good person to have room with.
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    • It would also encourage you to speak about any issue without worrying about the other's thoughts since you posses the same ideas about politics, music, and movies.
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    • It would also encourage you to speak about any issue without worrying about the other's thoughts since you possess the same ideas about politics, music, and movies.
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    • For example, when I started my first year in university in Batna 5 years ago, I had to roomate a person that I do not from before.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For example, when I started my first year in university in Batna 5 years ago, I had to roommate a person that I doid not fromknow/meet before.
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    • After some time sitting together, it turned out that we have different beliefs about life, and we had disagreements in many topics we opened to speak about.
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    • After some time sitting together, it turned out that we haved different beliefs about life, and we had disagreements in many topics we opened to speaup to talk about.
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    • I could not stay for long with him, so I had to look for another partner who is willing to share the aparement with me.
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    • I could not stay for long with him, so I had to look for another partner who iwas willing to share the aparetment with me.
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    • After some researches that I made, I found a person who is studying civil engineering whereas I was studying safety engineering.
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    • After some researches that I mad've done, I found a person who iwas studying civil engineering whereas I was studying safety engineering.
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    • Beside the point that we have different branches, it was an ideal person to live with due to the similarities that we had together.
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    • BesideApart from the poinfact that we havestudy different branches, it wasthey were an ideal person to live with due to the similarities that we shad togetherred.
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    • I had passed with him one of best moments in hanging outside time to time, traveling to different places in summer.
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    • I had passed with him one of the best moments inby hanging outside time to time, and traveling to different places in the summer.
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    • He told me once, when were talking about the characteristic a student must have in order to be with is saying the truth.
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    • He told me once, when were talking about the characteristic a student must have in order to be with is saytelling the truth/being honest.
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    • He brought to the discussion that we were having a story happened to him before he meet with me, that he lived with a guy who was weird most of the time being with him in his room.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He brought to the discussion that we were having a story that happened to him before he meet with me, that he lived with a guy who was weird most of the time being with him in his room.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24
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    • Each time he put doubt in himself, which made my friend worry about his money and stuff that he's leaving behind him each time whenever he go attend his classes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Each time he put doubt in himself, which made my friend worry about his money and stuff that he's leaving behind him eachvery time whenever hehad to go attend his classes.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25
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    • Due to the charge been built up, it made my mate to quite the room with this bizarre person and look for another one in order to have a peaceful life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Due to the charge been built up, it made my matefriend to quite the room with this bizarre person and look for another one in order to have a peaceful life.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26
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    • To conclude, life is full of adventures, and without a shadow of a doubt the life of the university is the most interesting one.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To conclude, life is full of adventures, and without a shadow of a doubt the life of thein university is the most interesting one.
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    • There are two major qualities an individual should look for while looking for a person to share a housing with, which they are similarity, and honesty.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There are two major qualities an individual should look for while looking for a person to share a housinge with, which theyare are similarity, and honesty.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 29ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 29
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