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  • A new invention

  • If you could invent something new, what product would you develop?
  • Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.
    • Technology became an essential element in our life, and we do not know what could we do without it.
    • With the rapid increase in development and the demand on new invention in different aspects of life, to invent gas sensor would be an absolutely an umpaccable solution without a shodow of a doubt.
    • In hold this belief for two main reasons.
  • Firstly, it will prevent injury and death from occuring in confined spaces in the industry or any other places basically.
    • Therefore, it will warn the workers from get in places that has high risk of confinment and help in preventing thousands of life across the world.
    • For example, when I was attending university in Batna 2 years ago, my chemistry professor taught us the danger of falling in a places that has less oxigene due to the present of high quantity of toxic gases or flammable one.
    • He argued that not all the workers have access to the handy sensor for gases that profesional companies have, and it would be ashame of letting people die just because they don't have access to such materials.
    • From then, it downed on me that it would be an ideal solution to place a sensor that can detect gases and send warning when inflammable or toxic gases are present in the vacinity.
    • Secondly, inventing new sensor that would detect toxic gases and alarm workers and people from the danger in the area would also benefit the reputation of the company in a sense that accident of such type would be eleminated.
    • Using the money that would be saved for the budged on the losses that would occuring as resulting of such indesirable events in other fields.
    • For instance, when I was preparing for a presentation for my fire safety class last year, I presented some of the data of the researches that was been done on these accidents around the global, and it was almost affecting all the industrial sectors.
    • Which made it vital for companies to find a solution for this delimma that they are having.
    • It could be resolved by creating a model that detect harmful gases and sending signals to the operator in the control station to warn the workers from geting closer to these places in order to prevent unwanted events.
    • In conclusion, inventing new elements in our life that would help us securing ourselves and our environment would bring Myriad benefits for families and societies.
    • Hence, creating a sensor that detects inflammable or toxic gases would be an umpaccble invention in the industry.
    • It will not only benefit the reputation of companies, but it would also prevent injuries and death from occuring during working in plants.

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    • With the rapid increase in development and the demand on new invention in different aspects of life, to invent gas sensor would be an absolutely an umpaccable solution without a shodow of a doubt.
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    • With the rapid increase in development and the demand onfor new invention in different aspects of life, to invent gas sensors would be an absolutely an uimpaeccable solution without a shoadow of a doubt.
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    • Therefore, it will warn the workers from get in places that has high risk of confinment and help in preventing thousands of life across the world.
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    • Therefore, it will warn the workers from getting in places that hasve a high risk of confinmentteminations and help in preventing thousands of lifeves across the world.
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    • For example, when I was attending university in Batna 2 years ago, my chemistry professor taught us the danger of falling in a places that has less oxigene due to the present of high quantity of toxic gases or flammable one.
      Votează acum!
    • For example, when I was attending university in Batna 2 years ago, my chemistry professor taught us the danger of falling in a places that hasve less oxigene due to the presentce of high quantity of toxic gases or flammable onegases.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 8ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 8
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    • He argued that not all the workers have access to the handy sensor for gases that profesional companies have, and it would be ashame of letting people die just because they don't have access to such materials.
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    • He argued that not all the workers have access to the handy sensors for gases that professional companies have, and it would be a shame tof letting people die just because they don't have access to such materialthese sensors.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 9ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 9
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    • From then, it downed on me that it would be an ideal solution to place a sensor that can detect gases and send warning when inflammable or toxic gases are present in the vacinity.
      Votează acum!
    • From then, it doawned on me that it would be an ideal solution to place a sensor that can detect gases and send warnings when inflammable or toxic gases are present in the vaicinity.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 10ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 10
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    • Secondly, inventing new sensor that would detect toxic gases and alarm workers and people from the danger in the area would also benefit the reputation of the company in a sense that accident of such type would be eleminated.
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    • Secondly, inventing new sensors that would detect toxic gases and alarm workers and people from the danger in the area would also benefit the reputation of the company in a sense that accidents of such type would be eleiminated.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 11ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 11
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    • For instance, when I was preparing for a presentation for my fire safety class last year, I presented some of the data of the researches that was been done on these accidents around the global, and it was almost affecting all the industrial sectors.
      Votează acum!
    • For instance, when I was preparing for a presentation for my fire safety class last year, I presented some of the data of the researches that washave been done on these accidents around the globale/world, and it was almost affecting all the industrial sectors.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 13ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 13
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    • It could be resolved by creating a model that detect harmful gases and sending signals to the operator in the control station to warn the workers from geting closer to these places in order to prevent unwanted events.
      Votează acum!
    • It could be resolved by creating a model that detects harmful gases and sending signals to the operator in the control station to warn the workers from geting closer to these places in order to prevent unwanted events.
    • ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 15ADAUGĂ o corecție NOU! - propoziție 15
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    • In conclusion, inventing new elements in our life that would help us securing ourselves and our environment would bring Myriad benefits for families and societies.
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    • In conclusion, inventing new elements in our life that would help us securing ourselves and our environment would bring Mmyriad benefits for families and societies.
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