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Văn bản từ Alya96 - English

    • Back to Reality

    • Finally after I had a long holiday I have got back to my collage life.
    • There were some random feelings I had on my mind like I don't wan't to get back I don't wan't to leave my friends, family and I don't wan't to sit in a bus for 12 hours that will be tiring. But here I am.
    • I got here at 3 AM in the morning I have got nobody to pick me up so I took a taxi.
  • When I got at my hostel there was an electricity problem and I tought that I was the only person there so it was kind of horror.
    • I should have unpaked my luggage but I barely looked at things so I decided to take a nap but I fell into a really deep sleep and slept over I couldn't set my alarm on because my cell died.
    • I rushed to take a shower I have an appointment with my advisor in terms up of my study things.
    • I had been consultation and get my progress checked by him.
    • The first day always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care a lots of things. there were some stuff I have to do and I have to buy.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • There were some random feelings I had on my mind like I don't wan't to get back I don't wan't to leave my friends, family and I don't wan't to sit in a bus for 12 hours that will be tiring. But here I am.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There were some random feelings I had on my mind like I don't wan't to get back I don't wan't to leave my friends, family and I don't wan't to sit in a bus for 12 hours that will be tiring. But here I am.
      Mario_crMario_cr profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • When I got at my hostel there was an electricity problem and I tought that I was the only person there so it was kind of horror.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I should have unpaked my luggage but I barely looked at things so I decided to take a nap but I fell into a really deep sleep and slept over I couldn't set my alarm on because my cell died.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I should have unpacked my luggage but I barely looked at things so I decided to take a nap but I fell into a really deep sleep and slept over .I couldn't set my alarm on because my cell died.
      Mario_crMario_cr profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I rushed to take a shower I have an appointment with my advisor in terms up of my study things.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I rushed to take a shower because I haved an appointment with my advisor in terms up ofregarding my study (things).
      phil_leephil_lee profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • The first day always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care a lots of things. there were some stuff I have to do and I have to buy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The first day always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care aof lots of things. there wereas some stuff I haved to do and I haved to buy.
      Mario_crMario_cr profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The first day is always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care of a lots of things. tThere wereas some stuff I haved to do and I haved to buy/shop.
      phil_leephil_lee profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8