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    • Back to Reality

    • Finally after I had a long holiday I have got back to my collage life.
    • There were some random feelings I had on my mind like I don't wan't to get back I don't wan't to leave my friends, family and I don't wan't to sit in a bus for 12 hours that will be tiring. But here I am.
    • I got here at 3 AM in the morning I have got nobody to pick me up so I took a taxi.
  • When I got at my hostel there was an electricity problem and I tought that I was the only person there so it was kind of horror.
    • I should have unpaked my luggage but I barely looked at things so I decided to take a nap but I fell into a really deep sleep and slept over I couldn't set my alarm on because my cell died.
    • I rushed to take a shower I have an appointment with my advisor in terms up of my study things.
    • I had been consultation and get my progress checked by him.
    • The first day always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care a lots of things. there were some stuff I have to do and I have to buy.

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    • There were some random feelings I had on my mind like I don't wan't to get back I don't wan't to leave my friends, family and I don't wan't to sit in a bus for 12 hours that will be tiring. But here I am.
      투표하세요!
    • There were some random feelings I had on my mind like I don't wan't to get back I don't wan't to leave my friends, family and I don't wan't to sit in a bus for 12 hours that will be tiring. But here I am.
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    • When I got at my hostel there was an electricity problem and I tought that I was the only person there so it was kind of horror.
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    • I should have unpaked my luggage but I barely looked at things so I decided to take a nap but I fell into a really deep sleep and slept over I couldn't set my alarm on because my cell died.
      투표하세요!
    • I should have unpacked my luggage but I barely looked at things so I decided to take a nap but I fell into a really deep sleep and slept over .I couldn't set my alarm on because my cell died.
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    • I rushed to take a shower I have an appointment with my advisor in terms up of my study things.
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    • I rushed to take a shower because I haved an appointment with my advisor in terms up ofregarding my study (things).
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    • The first day always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care a lots of things. there were some stuff I have to do and I have to buy.
      투표하세요!
    • The first day always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care aof lots of things. there wereas some stuff I haved to do and I haved to buy.
      Mario_crMario_cr profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
    • The first day is always be the most busiest day ever because I had to take care of a lots of things. tThere wereas some stuff I haved to do and I haved to buy/shop.
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